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Old 08-23-06, 03:02 AM   #1
Wordz AhGod
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From: FLA
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this bitch'll make a fool of himself, so thinks for providing the show
congrat's..
your the man of the hour.. twenty three minutes, ten seconds ago
I liked this line...wouldv been a lot better with out the Congrats part
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I'll make you a fashion statement, rush lingo? wha kinda name is that
n last time i checked.. RL been worn, washed up, played n wack
Good name play
this guy talks alott ah shit, so i won't stop till i fracture his hip
n u must be dizzy as fuck.. accounting for all the lines that u flipped
decent punch
i lack respect for you dude, but hear what i'm spittin is tru, u geek
so 's kno doubt u'll make the top 10.. punches for the mag this week :/
This might be the personal of the battle for me
pussy i'm take'n my place back, so just face it you've been wack
n if this punch take's a turn for the worst.. U should be bracin for impact
really good punch
get this kid off my dick, 1 punch n his vision is blurry
so fuck, why rush?.. when i can take this win in a hurry
ok nameplay...all rush lingo nameplays are played but you did ok with it

All in all. this verse was tight....I read through the entire thing and didn't think not one line to be meh or wak at all.....really good verse with a good flow and ill punches and personals. Also had the punch of battle

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you talk tough, but once the tools and the shells out
Art can be bought for a penny just to prove he's a sell out
Good nameplay but not as hard hitting as Id like it to be
watch me take this. you were decent, now ya flows lost it
i'm a Baller.. and to be honest you just the wrong Artest
Kinda wak nameplay...it was too simple
it's nothing to me, i'ma leave this niggas ass slaughtered
artistik. said he tap ass.. please, he can't even tap water
ok wordplay but It felt a bit forced
i know you write ya girl letters cuz ya goin through a hardship
but all ya sweet haikus, she told me she poem in the garbage
could have been worded better
from all of ya lines i can tell ya cluless on ya words duke
this nigga BEGGIN me to drop like him losin got a curfew
Dukes gay ass net word...the punch was mehh.
and on another note i really hated quotin this queer
that's reppin a crew, that ain't even been dope in a year
Queer is a played word to use really and the punch was kinda dead

Rushes verse was ok but it wasn't as good as I know he could do...there were a few forced lines and missworded punches...He had good concept but just not better material then Artistik in this battle. Shouldv came a bit harder in my oppinion but still a str8 battle

V/ Artistik

RTF later in the week when I drop my verse on my battle with Y.I.
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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..



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Old 08-23-06, 10:14 AM   #2
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this guy talks alott ah shit, so i won't stop till i fracture his hip
n u must be dizzy as fuck.. accounting for all the lines that u flipped
pussy i'm take'n my place back, so just face it you've been wack
n if this punch take's a turn for the worst.. U should be bracin for impact

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you talk tough, but once the tools and the shells out
Art can be bought for a penny just to prove he's a sell out

Yeh...I got Artistik taking this, he was more consistent, and had better punches - Rush, you had some forced lines man, but that quote was pretty good...

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