Yeah, this was good, but right away you spelled enthrawl wrong.. thats a text turnoff... especailly at the beggingin... anyways the story was pretty good.. i dont think ive ever left feed on your shit, but whenever i do i notcie that your pieces alwaus lack a complex rhyme scheme.. this time it had apretty good one though.. i hope you lied when you said you were retiring on rb.. because your elevating to very very nice... good piece... hit a link in my signture.