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Old 09-07-06, 04:55 AM   #1
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Peepin - Willa - Wow, I seriously have not peeped the songs section for awhile - you improved your stuff alot too. Adlibs are nicely done, and flow is straight. Quality not too bad, like your lyrics. hook - ummm.. Not really feelin it - I woulda done it a lil different. The melody is super nice, but Trip comes in too hard where i woulda done it smoother as its a pretty smooth track. Anyways - Tony - Nice verse bro - ain't heard you in a LONG time either. Ya vocals seem a little low to me, but good verse, nice lyrics. Trip - Vocals seem to match the hook best obviously, but it seems like you tryin to really put alot of different flow changes into a track that doesn't really need it. Good verse again - so far this track is nice. Enygma - Low vocals again, but ya flow hasn't really changed - haha still good - seeing as I liked ya flow even back in the day. Best lyrics in my opinion, jus felt it best I guess.

Overall - nice track ya'll - good 4 person colab.

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