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08-12-06, 06:37 PM | #1 | |||
Beginning Your Ending
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What does it take to put a Serb in the ground?
IP: 66DA 0666
Who do you think you are you fucking no balled little junior?
You’re immature as fuck, and I can’t be ugly as you all bet Cause if my face takes years off your life… …You wouldn’t actually be born yet I’ll make you fall for fun until you’re fucking balling son We’ll take this one step at a time… till I’ve smashed your face on all of them I’ll cut this fucker up and be torturing this fag for an hour long With so many tears running down Serbs cheek it’ll be like a Bosnian marathon I’ll break an acorn over your nose, so hard that you fail to grab it So I’m busting a fucking nut in your face just like Datrus’s daily habit You’ll NEVER champ 1-2, we’ll only be seeing your blood shine Cause in Serb there isn’t a heavyweight… …Just a heavy wait to see a good line The kid loves being queer, I’m serious this bitch is sick Serb demanded stiff competition… and started grappling with Kyrptics dick Together this could have been legend; instead I have to bleed this mouse Cause how’s Serb gonna meet me halfway when the bitch never leaves his house? Yeah so I abuse my position, I’m still leaving you fumbling And if I’m on a power trip… why the fuck are YOU the one stumbling? You’re wack as fuck man, so don’t pretend you’re a genius Cause how you creating Faimez Quotes… …When you’re actually wacker than he is? Your style’s fucking tight creative and I know it’s right to say this But you’ve gotta be dope when you murk your bath water on a nightly basis RV likes bird watching and the pond geese make us all shout Cause we love a good DUCK just like Serb when he reads my callouts So don’t bet on your winning bitch, I’ll be fucking spending it jerk With your rep finishing so frayed it’ll resemble the hem of your skirt My clothes are cool as fuck, whereas yours just need a switch I’ve been known to Rocafella… but this is the first time I’ve beat a bitch Harshness and humour are text essentials and that’s just to start with And if I’m the half power it explains why you’ve always been the halfwit So don’t be hating on my football skills, cause it’s probably nothing when What’s wrong with me kicking balls… …When it’s YOU that’s the one sucking them! R.I.P Serbness 1996-2006 |
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08-12-06, 06:38 PM | #2 | |||
Beginning Your Ending
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IP: 66DA 0666
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08-12-06, 10:18 PM | #3 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 4EB9 DFE7
fuck the verse
i'm luagh'n at u put'n his birth date as 1996 lmao.............................. u funny my nigga |
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08-13-06, 09:42 AM | #4 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 5BFB C1C7
This was pretty raw, still... it won't be better than mine.
You had some nice lines.... real clever shit. Some of the concepts I swear I have seen before though, but overall this was a nice verse. It was consistent, had some hard punches and basically whored Serb. |
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08-13-06, 10:44 AM | #5 | |||||
A Life Of Chryme
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IP: 8165 5E15
This was prettty dope.....
only problem was the merking the bath water line...ive seen that somewhere else...other than that shit was hard and funny good job
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08-13-06, 02:03 PM | #6 | ||||
Beginning Your Ending
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IP: DFE1 F7A6
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Yeah I've heard it before too but worded a lot worse, I just took it and worded it well. I basically needed 30 lines so stuck it in with the rest. |
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08-13-06, 04:44 PM | #7 | |||||||
I see dumb people
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IP: C145 EA47
lmao this was fuckin' ill. the bustin a nut and rocafella lines killed it. rest were pretty nice too. real consistent. dope verse. killed that mofo. illness. RIP serb the herb
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08-14-06, 06:26 AM | #8 | |||
Beginning Your Ending
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IP: BABF 4398
Haha thanks on the feed Spul.
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08-15-06, 06:19 AM | #9 | |||
Beginning Your Ending
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IP: A58E D35D
Upping, I'll return the feedback or drop an honest vote in one of your battles.
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09-06-06, 01:12 AM | #10 | ||||
Within Eternity's Wither
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IP: F3DC 7738
lol damn good drop, less played concepts so this was a pretty fresh piece
*wonders how the response would be* *shrugs* this was pretty damn decent
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09-24-06, 08:38 PM | #11 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 666A 5381
yea id have 2 agree shit was nice only thing dat fucked it up really was r.i.p.1996-2006 i mean its like u killed sum 10 year old kid...lol but shit wa snice but im surprised cuz ur lines run like mine but peeps say i stretch my lines...hmm...funny oh well nice drop
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09-26-06, 12:08 PM | #12 | ||||
++ON TOP++
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IP: 6D77 93CD
this was somethin serious shawty. i aint seen serbs reply to this but it better be on point.
some of the bars in there were not as hard hitting as others but they can't all be killas ya feel me. this joint was my favorite though cuz of the wordplay Yeah so I abuse my position, I’m still leaving you fumbling And if I’m on a power trip… why the fuck are YOU the one stumbling? so hit me back on my shit shawty...be easy |
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09-26-06, 12:33 PM | #13 | ||||||
ROFL @ u niggas since '04
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IP: 27E2 8442
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wigga please...no they dont. with your one long ass sentence having ass man. but this was a tight piece man. some lines were so so just put em in to make the verse bigger but most of the lines was good. Nice concepts and punches. but question....Is serb Faime S. Quotez? or did you just put that in to trash him by saying he doesn't make faimed quotes coz he's more wak then that nigga by the name? Either way tight and for the most part consistant verse man. 1 |
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