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Old 08-12-06, 06:37 PM   #1
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What does it take to put a Serb in the ground?

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Who do you think you are you fucking no balled little junior?

You’re immature as fuck, and I can’t be ugly as you all bet
Cause if my face takes years off your life…
…You wouldn’t actually be born yet
I’ll make you fall for fun until you’re fucking balling son
We’ll take this one step at a time… till I’ve smashed your face on all of them
I’ll cut this fucker up and be torturing this fag for an hour long
With so many tears running down Serbs cheek it’ll be like a Bosnian marathon
I’ll break an acorn over your nose, so hard that you fail to grab it
So I’m busting a fucking nut in your face just like Datrus’s daily habit
You’ll NEVER champ 1-2, we’ll only be seeing your blood shine
Cause in Serb there isn’t a heavyweight…
…Just a heavy wait to see a good line
The kid loves being queer, I’m serious this bitch is sick
Serb demanded stiff competition… and started grappling with Kyrptics dick
Together this could have been legend; instead I have to bleed this mouse
Cause how’s Serb gonna meet me halfway when the bitch never leaves his house?
Yeah so I abuse my position, I’m still leaving you fumbling
And if I’m on a power trip… why the fuck are YOU the one stumbling?
You’re wack as fuck man, so don’t pretend you’re a genius
Cause how you creating Faimez Quotes…
…When you’re actually wacker than he is?
Your style’s fucking tight creative and I know it’s right to say this
But you’ve gotta be dope when you murk your bath water on a nightly basis
RV likes bird watching and the pond geese make us all shout
Cause we love a good DUCK just like Serb when he reads my callouts
So don’t bet on your winning bitch, I’ll be fucking spending it jerk
With your rep finishing so frayed it’ll resemble the hem of your skirt
My clothes are cool as fuck, whereas yours just need a switch
I’ve been known to Rocafella… but this is the first time I’ve beat a bitch
Harshness and humour are text essentials and that’s just to start with
And if I’m the half power it explains why you’ve always been the halfwit
So don’t be hating on my football skills, cause it’s probably nothing when
What’s wrong with me kicking balls…
…When it’s YOU that’s the one sucking them!

R.I.P Serbness 1996-2006
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Old 08-12-06, 06:38 PM   #2
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Old 08-12-06, 10:18 PM   #3
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fuck the verse

i'm luagh'n at u put'n his birth date as 1996

lmao..............................

u funny my nigga
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Old 08-13-06, 09:42 AM   #4
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This was pretty raw, still... it won't be better than mine.

You had some nice lines.... real clever shit. Some of the concepts I swear I have seen before though, but overall this was a nice verse. It was consistent, had some hard punches and basically whored Serb.
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Old 08-13-06, 10:44 AM   #5
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This was prettty dope.....

only problem was the merking the bath water line...ive seen that somewhere else...other than that shit was hard and funny good job
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Old 08-13-06, 02:03 PM   #6
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This was prettty dope.....

only problem was the merking the bath water line...ive seen that somewhere else...other than that shit was hard and funny good job


Yeah I've heard it before too but worded a lot worse, I just took it and worded it well. I basically needed 30 lines so stuck it in with the rest.
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Old 08-13-06, 04:44 PM   #7
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lmao this was fuckin' ill. the bustin a nut and rocafella lines killed it. rest were pretty nice too. real consistent. dope verse. killed that mofo. illness. RIP serb the herb
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Old 08-14-06, 06:26 AM   #8
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Haha thanks on the feed Spul.
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Old 08-15-06, 06:19 AM   #9
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Upping, I'll return the feedback or drop an honest vote in one of your battles.
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Old 09-06-06, 01:12 AM   #10
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lol damn good drop, less played concepts so this was a pretty fresh piece

*wonders how the response would be*

*shrugs*

this was pretty damn decent
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Old 09-24-06, 08:38 PM   #11
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yea id have 2 agree shit was nice only thing dat fucked it up really was r.i.p.1996-2006 i mean its like u killed sum 10 year old kid...lol but shit wa snice but im surprised cuz ur lines run like mine but peeps say i stretch my lines...hmm...funny oh well nice drop
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Old 09-26-06, 12:08 PM   #12
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this was somethin serious shawty. i aint seen serbs reply to this but it better be on point.
some of the bars in there were not as hard hitting as others but they can't all be killas ya feel me.

this joint was my favorite though cuz of the wordplay

Yeah so I abuse my position, I’m still leaving you fumbling
And if I’m on a power trip… why the fuck are YOU the one stumbling?

so hit me back on my shit shawty...be easy
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Old 09-26-06, 12:33 PM   #13
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but im surprised cuz ur lines run like mine but peeps say i stretch my lines...hmm...funny oh well nice drop


wigga please...no they dont. with your one long ass sentence having ass man.

but this was a tight piece man. some lines were so so just put em in to make the verse bigger but most of the lines was good. Nice concepts and punches.

but question....Is serb Faime S. Quotez? or did you just put that in to trash him by saying he doesn't make faimed quotes coz he's more wak then that nigga by the name?

Either way tight and for the most part consistant verse man. 1
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