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Old 09-26-06, 05:38 AM   #1
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Wordz AhGod & Yvonne-Get It Popping(Modifyed)

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Verse 1 : Wordz AhGod


Hooks : Wordz AhGod


Verse 2 : Yvonne


verse 3 : Wordz AhGod


ps : i got a new mic and its the first time 'm using it..xcuse my bad mixing too...thanx


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Old 09-26-06, 06:43 PM   #2
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DAMN LOVE THIS SHIT...one of the best i heard on rv
wordz aghod i never really heard any of ur shit before
so this comes as a bit of a shock..cuz i didnt expect it
i thought u was just gon be another wack cat off rv
but ur delivery was dope as hell..catchy lyrics
and ur flow was all on point on top of all that

im LOVING this beat..its raw as hell freal..VERY NICE beat pick

yvonne DAMN GIRL i had ta clear out my earwax ta believe what i was hearing
u sound a HUNDRED times better than last time i heard u
mostly noticed that ur delivery got wayyy better
u sound waaayyy more confident and u got waayy better quality
could tell that was ur new mic...cuz ur old one can never match up
ur flow was all on point and everything..good job sexy

i give this a 9.5/10 keep it pumpin through them speakers
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Old 09-26-06, 06:47 PM   #3
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listning---intro is gross............this ish is way too loud so far
this is ight first verse fades in and out kinda thou.....cant really hear it all but for tha most part sounds nice.......good flow and ish............
second verse.........
sounds ight cant hear tha lyrics cause its mixed shity.........flows on point.......
delevery is much better tan no one comes close........yeah this was a dope track needs better mixing...but for wut it is its illy
good drop
and yvoone.......can u send me that comes close beat cause i cant fucking find a dlable version anywhere
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Old 09-26-06, 07:15 PM   #4
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i thank y'all for the feed...

troublesome i aint got the beat no more..ask tony green he shud have it!
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Old 09-26-06, 07:26 PM   #5
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ight tanx ma.............
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Old 09-26-06, 08:20 PM   #6
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word..thanks on the feed ya'll. hit us back with links or something to ya tracks and we'll give feed on it.
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Old 09-26-06, 08:30 PM   #7
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BOOOOOOOOOOOOO @ yall callin this Get it poping???

But Wordz puttin it DOWN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

love this indian jump off....!
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Old 09-26-06, 10:29 PM   #8
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the beat is WEIRD. not my favor, an not really well produced, its really scratchy. verse1 is too quite. flow is ok... couldnt tell you about the lyrics, i dont understand any of it, it needs upped volume wise... chorus is ok, its repeated too much, that sampled voice is annoying as hell. verse 2 is better volume wise, still could use upped a bit. volume is good an lyrics are good, i can understand this one = ). work on your mixing, an find beats that are better produced.

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Old 09-26-06, 10:35 PM   #9
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^ timberland made that beat fam....but thanks for the feed dawg. appreciate the honesty
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Old 09-27-06, 05:34 PM   #10
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lol ok yvonne lol i'll be nice

listening through audio technica ATH m40fs's:

the first verse is WAY too quiet. the beat is type loud, and the first verse needs some compression in a bad way. the highs sizzle a little too and its just flat out hard to hear jack shit you're saying over the beat. the beat it self is ight. the hook is flat, needed at least another layer on the vocals cuz you sound like you're just droning on.

second verse came in a little too heavy on the deliv imo should have come in a little slower then worked its way up becaues the rest of the verse can sound flat and boring after you come in on a heavy attack like that. i'm saying that form a club trac kpoint of view since that's evidently what you guys were goin for. you have the same problem as the first verse, the beat just overwhelms you. i dunno maybe you guys turned the beat up to try and hide your mic humming. that's what a noise gate is for.

how the hell you only gonna have 2 verses on a song liek this?? wordz shoulda done a third verse for this to make it more rounded off, but both you guys shoulda turned the beat down beacause its WAY louder than either of your vocals. i can't even give feedback on your lyrics as individuals because i could barely make out what you 2 were saying and the beat was shouting so loud back at me whne i searched in those spaces that i didn't want to "look".


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Old 09-27-06, 05:54 PM   #11
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^^yea it was a bit loud..but still dope
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Old 09-27-06, 06:52 PM   #12
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word...We'll fix it then reupload...thanks for the honest feed apexxx. I'll put another verse down. I just stoped there coz the beat stoped there but I can loop that shit out a bit more and also uppin the volume on the verse and lower the volume on the beat. But another reason why you may not be able to understand my verse is because some of it is in spanish but most of it is in english too.
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Old 09-29-06, 12:56 PM   #13
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upping for yvonne and wordz aghod...
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im not even leavin feed yvonne cuz u fuckin no showed against me in black rose!!!!!
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jk, ok well beat is good

yal need to TURN THE FUCKIN BEAT DOWN!!!
i can't really hear shit, yvonne gots a nice flow from wut i can tell but i seriously cant understand the lyrics. got a lil fuzzyness in ya mic or somethin. use a noise reduction or somethin to get ridda that. damn wtf? i couldnt even tell where the 1st verse was lmao ummm....yea turn the beat down lol

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