Checkin in .................................................. ......ill do 10

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Stanza Productions *Dem City Boys*

check....thats good

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3085392
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235298
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235297
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3085872

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Yo ima be The Bigger man and Go ahead and Drop this verse
Bcuz when We Order skills of Rv in Ascending Order You Always Came First
ManThe Feins Love To Follow My path bcuz I always Drop Dope
You mad bcuz yo verse Get Double dutched Like Crackheads playin Jump-rope
You wanna Come see me ......Then You got to up Ya Game Man
Bcuz Ill Do like The Guy off waterboy and Steal Your gameplan
Man ill make your body lean Like dro and split Your spleen
Trey Stay With high Jumps....Like Crackhead on olympic trampoleans
I might as well be the trotter the way I trample This dude
man you sufficate at the clubs bcuz not even the wind would dance with you
Man Ill be your worste nightmare..But im in your girls wet dreams
Dog You couldnt Come Hot if ya Dick was a flamethrower powered by Gasoline

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One Love

*Bridging The Rap*

Stanza Productions *Dem City Boys*

battled this kid a while back...and it seem's like he aint got any better

ighttttt

Son, dont you read ya battles....good raps you ain't about
the hints to quit,...when every voter..says please sign out
ya mind's stick in a drought, writers block you got 4 life
but stazna'll finally come off sharpe...against trey's...tip of his knife
fag gets everything jack'd, shoes,money almost his only toy
....woulda been takin away...from'em if he wasn't born a boy
your not making any noise ,you ain't adding up in weight
ya record'll show, after this....trey's verse'll leave you ate
Shottys aim'd at ya face,give the order to the crew
...it'll be ludacris..the release threapy we'll show you
me an the boyz'll stoomp'em, till his whole shit is busted,hurtin
The kick push will do on him'll...have lupe mixing a new verson

key boooyyyy

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umm.. LMAO where are the punchlines??? Stanza wtf Cum Hot?? this battle was weaaaaaak.. umm im gonna go with Trey cause i guess he attempted some multi's and his verse wasnt AS gay.. Stanza Crackheads in the Olympics?

v.trey

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this battle was weak for both sides. no punchlines and most of the shit you were sayin had nothin to do with your setup. stanza wtf were you thinking when you wrote this. if his dick was a flame thrower then what else would it run on than gasoline? trey nothin stood out it was all boring but i'll give this to trey by a small margin.

v. trey

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lol at the votes....i keyd my shit in 4 mins...i aint wastiing shit on this battle

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yea.. i thought this battle was weak.. str8 up

stanza-
i actually didn't mind your opener dude, but that was your best set by a country mile imo. you had two sets where your intended punch centered around meta's on crack addicts.. which had me like wtf. you had me going wtf @ a lot of shit honestly.. especially your played out closer.

trey methodz-
some dude said you had multi's.. but i didn't see any so wtvr lol. you said this was a key and i can imagine that being true. i felt you had a few concepts which could've been re-worded and made pretty ight.. but as is a lot of your shit did come across as rushed. your closer was played to me.. i've seen 'kick push' done to death recently, but maybe thats just me.

but anyways.. v/ trey methodz - for being the better in a pretty average battle. keep at it though guys.

LOL at the votes ........................Yall is so steamin Serious It snothing but Net man yall act like its actually somethin to prove here .....lol...But wateva....i be to busy to sit back and jus think and think on everyline I jus get on and type wateva come to my mind in a 3-5 min period .........But Anyways .............Thanx for the votes ....and Yall Need to stop Being followers and vote on what you think most people vote for battler A bcuz the first two voters Did lol

Peace ....Ill be back for next week I got to go to work

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One Love

*Bridging The Rap*

Stanza Productions *Dem City Boys*

stanza i know that verse took you atleast 10 m9inutes cause you yourself told me you cant write in under 10 minutes

but anyways

v/ trey for actually attempting punches and having some multis...

Stanza ou need to work on your set ups and how you excute your punches

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meh battle, no real punches in this one kinda rushed from both sides but like Stanza said its da net i don't really take txt serious either (audios another story)

V-Trey for coming more consistant w/ punches and attempts at multis week battle but w/e

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ya mind's stick in a drought, writers block you got 4 life
but stazna'll finally come off sharpe...against trey's...tip of his knife

me an the boyz'll stoomp'em, till his whole shit is busted,hurtin
The kick push will do on him'll...have lupe mixing a new verson


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Man Ill be your worste nightmare..But im in your girls wet dreams
Dog You couldnt Come Hot if ya Dick was a flamethrower powered by Gasoline

^played

but you had two crackhead punchs not really feeling ya verse...trey def won this kinda easy...



v-trey

ya mind's stick in a drought, writers block you got 4 life
but stazna'll finally come off sharpe...against trey's...tip of his knife
Shottys aim'd at ya face,give the order to the crew
...it'll be ludacris..the release threapy we'll show you

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ManThe Feins Love To Follow My path bcuz I always Drop Dope
You mad bcuz yo verse Get Double dutched Like Crackheads playin Jump-rope
STANZA U USED TWO CRACKHEAD ANALOGIES WHICH HURT YOU ALSO THAT FLAMETHROWER DICK SHIT, STAY AWAY FROM DICK BARS
JUST FOR FUTURE REFERENCE CUZ YOU DEF HAVE POTENTIAL TO WRITE
JUST AVOID CERTAIN THINGS LIKE THAT

TREY YOU BEEN TEXTCING FOR A WHILE ILL SAVE THE SPEECH
DECENT VERSE 2 QUOTABLES
V/ TREY