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09-24-06, 09:14 AM | #1 | ||||
The Saviour
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5. JTR (16-7) vs 6. Faime S. Quotez (2-0)
IP: E633 9937
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09-25-06, 12:32 AM | #2 | ||||
Jack The Ripper
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IP: FEE6 7529
Ok..................
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It's JTR, lyrical art
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09-27-06, 01:32 AM | #3 | |||||
Jack The Ripper
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IP: FEE6 7529
You again?
Ayo, Past few weeks the kids I battled were no names, so this should be tight I'm finally battling someone I recognise you're that kid who I already beat in this league, right? Hahaha Please dyke, I believe it was a KO, ayo, you're wack bitch Only time Quote was decent was on RB waaaaaay back bitch Get cracked bitch, with ya weak ass text, you're lame ofcourse So fuck dissing his verses when even the wordplay in his name is forced Cop pain with force, scare me? Not likely, ya game aint dope I was shook, I thought I'd be up against famous quotes then I realised it was just Faime S. Quotez Ya shamed & broke, I beat him once, now again i'm rippin this queer Quote:
AIGHT KEMP! I gave him a few months, beat him again, what should I give him a year!? So much for elevation, you went from wack to semi-wack, CONGRADULATIONS! I'll show you what pain is, and send the planet out of orbit when I kick Uranus I'm an optimist, positive that I rock this shit, my fans in bunches He's negative, so this pessimist whenever he tries to land his punches Fuck ebonics and slang, I got proper english, still a hustler all day tho While the only time he 'slangs' coke is by refering to it as yayo You're played yo, I'm Jack The Ripper, lemme abreviate, it's Jack bitch! You're Faime S. Writer, lemme abreviate it, you're Wack bitch! Girls grip my cock, I take em out to their movies so my dick aint soft Ya Faimes also watching the chicks flic, calls all girls just flick him off Like FUCK YOU! Who ever fathered ya style should give you a spanking Cuz you're Top. 6 in the league, but not even on the list for power rankings So lemme end it like this (cuz i'm getting bored of beating you with no effort) I got the jive & i'm mack, i'm a star and bitches striven for Jack We all get our 15 minutes of fame ...but Faime's girl can only hope for 5 at the max! Are you fucking serious, where's the competition at? BITCHEZ!
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09-28-06, 02:13 AM | #4 | ||||
Jack The Ripper
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IP: FEE6 7529
yo dude, drop already, waiting is boring.
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09-28-06, 05:47 PM | #5 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 3F4A 57DE
Quote:
And now look... Quote:
Look familiar lol... Yo.. You claim there's no competition with me, call yaself a fuckin pro. ....yet, you recycling lines you used on me 6 months ago? Ya raps are trash, but it would've been nice if you wrote some.. but if you just have to recycle a line. . ...at least recycle a dope one! Why should I write to this clown, you prolly recycled the round! and RV ain't like that bar the 1st time you used it. . ....so you think they liking it now? You not nice with it child, even ya labels not liking ya style! they say its 'useless holding on to you' like 'mics with no sound' Don't talk on chicks, you can barely go a minute with that dick! only way Jack lasting long on a bed. . ....is if slow thieves are stealing a mattress! Chicks ain't touchin ya cock, you just be fronting alot... only time gurls 'seeking Jack'... is when they wanna get robbed! Now don't think I don't like ya posts n they're worthless opinions. cause I do be feeling ya posts. . ....when none of your verses are in them! You can't be good.. I battled twice and won, rising gracefully. while you battled 23 times... and still at the same rank as me! I'll swing at ya mouth, and crack ya teeth til hardly nones left. put ya top row in an orphanage. . ....when I break em apart from the rest! Like you eating stiff food, you like taking it hard to the neck... so I ain't talkin bout MCs spittin on you. . ....when I say they put they bars in ya neck! Claiming you selling drugs to folks n peeps, you a fraud. the last bag you gave out... was fulla groceries on ya job! . . The whole 24 lines you dropped was the lamest and worst. cause the only quotes you had... was my name in your verse!
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09-28-06, 06:54 PM | #6 | ||||
Jack The Ripper
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IP: FEE6 7529
thanks for feeding off my verse. -1 votes for you, 0 votes me, woot, i'm winning
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09-29-06, 12:33 AM | #7 | |||
Light Weight
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IP: 5163 CDCF
^ does recycling = some sort of voting deduction? if so wouldn't it start at 0-0? neway who gives a fuck..
Past few weeks the kids I battled were no names, so this should be tight I'm finally battling someone I recognise you're that kid who I already beat in this league, right? So much for elevation, you went from wack to semi-wack, CONGRADULATIONS! I'll show you what pain is, and send the planet out of orbit when I kick Uranus Girls grip my cock, I take em out to their movies so my dick aint soft Ya Faimes also watching the chicks flic, calls all girls just flick him off I got the jive & i'm mack, i'm a star and bitches striven for Jack We all get our 15 minutes of fame ...but Faime's girl can only hope for 5 at the max! recycling that nameplay was a bad move.. especially considering you referenced that battle.. but i guess it's rather minor.. that might've actually worked out cool if you'd put something like 'history repeating' or some shit in the set up but eh. the uranus wordplay could easily be played but i haven't seen it so i quoted it. i've seen pessimist wordplay done before. power rankings was a cool personal but a bit too bland for my liking. chick flick and your closer were dope. vs. You claim there's no competition with me, call yaself a fuckin pro. ....yet, you recycling lines you used on me 6 months ago? Like you eating stiff food, you like taking it hard to the neck... so I ain't talkin bout MCs spittin on you. . ....when I say they put they bars in ya neck! Claiming you selling drugs to folks n peeps, you a fraud. the last bag you gave out... was fulla groceries on ya job! The whole 24 lines you dropped was the lamest and worst. cause the only quotes you had... was my name in your verse! the recycling expose was cool imo.. this was one of few times i think feeding could be tolerated. i think three sets based around it was a bit excessive though. the line that started 'don't talk about chicks' was a bad move.. you could've worded that differently but as is, i feel you feed with that. i actually preferred the second half of your verse > the first half. your last three sets were my favourites from your verse.. i've seen grocery type lines before but yours was a nice spin on it. you lacked consistency though.. shit like the 'mics with no sound' (mainly cause i don't see how "style" & "sound" rhyme) and 'slow thieves line' weren't on par with how you ended this. v/ Jack. i've got y'all tied on quotables but i felt fame s. lacked in consistency. close battle though dudes.. keep at it. |
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09-29-06, 09:59 AM | #8 | ||||
Semper Fi
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
So much for elevation, you went from wack to semi-wack, CONGRADULATIONS!
I'll show you what pain is, and send the planet out of orbit when I kick Uranus Girls grip my cock, I take em out to their movies so my dick aint soft Ya Faimes also watching the chicks flic, calls all girls just flick him off I got the jive & i'm mack, i'm a star and bitches striven for Jack We all get our 15 minutes of fame ...but Faime's girl can only hope for 5 at the max! v.s. Claiming you selling drugs to folks n peeps, you a fraud. the last bag you gave out... was fulla groceries on ya job! The whole 24 lines you dropped was the lamest and worst. cause the only quotes you had... was my name in your verse! v/ Jack....Yall both had some good memorable quotes in your verses. And yall both had great punches . I just felt Jack had more and came more consitent.
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09-29-06, 01:38 PM | #9 | |||||||
the real man of steel
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IP: 0FDA 614C
Past few weeks the kids I battled were no names, so this should be tight
I'm finally battling someone I recognise you're that kid who I already beat in this league, right? So much for elevation, you went from wack to semi-wack, CONGRADULATIONS! I'll show you what pain is, and send the planet out of orbit when I kick Uranus Girls grip my cock, I take em out to their movies so my dick aint soft Ya Faimes also watching the chicks flic, calls all girls just flick him off I got the jive & i'm mack, i'm a star and bitches striven for Jack We all get our 15 minutes of fame ...but Faime's girl can only hope for 5 at the max! Vs Like you eating stiff food, you like taking it hard to the neck... so I ain't talkin bout MCs spittin on you. . ....when I say they put they bars in ya neck! Claiming you selling drugs to folks n peeps, you a fraud. the last bag you gave out... was fulla groceries on ya job! V/jtr....this was a good one actually...faime...came wit some good lines his verse was decent the ones i qouted were good but you fell off at the end...jtr your verse was funny it had some punchs that made me laugh...it was more consistent than quotez...good battle to both
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09-29-06, 03:00 PM | #10 | |||
I Hurt.
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IP: 2AC9 5FB1
Past few weeks the kids I battled were no names, so this should be tight
I'm finally battling someone I recognise you're that kid who I already beat in this league, right? Please dyke, I believe it was a KO, ayo, you're wack bitch Only time Quote was decent was on RB waaaaaay back bitch Ya shamed & broke, I beat him once, now again i'm rippin this queer AIGHT KEMP! I gave him a few months, beat him again, what should I give him a year!? I got the jive & i'm mack, i'm a star and bitches striven for Jack We all get our 15 minutes of fame ...but Faime's girl can only hope for 5 at the max! vs. You claim there's no competition with me, call yaself a fuckin pro. ....yet, you recycling lines you used on me 6 months ago? Don't talk on chicks, you can barely go a minute with that dick! only way Jack lasting long on a bed. . ....is if slow thieves are stealing a mattress! You can't be good.. I battled twice and won, rising gracefully. while you battled 23 times... and still at the same rank as me! Jack really didn't try here and the verse showed it.. some tight lines it, but also a lotta filler. Faime, hat mattress line was corny but lol, i thought it was kinda funny. You had a few other good lines, but u didn't come hard enough. Try makin' ur verses more mad and funny rather than just funny n' u'll hit harder. Vote - Jack |
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09-29-06, 03:38 PM | #11 | |||
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IP: 1C0F 1C11
Past few weeks the kids I battled were no names, so this should be tight
I'm finally battling someone I recognise you're that kid who I already beat in this league, right? So much for elevation, you went from wack to semi-wack, CONGRADULATIONS! I'll show you what pain is, and send the planet out of orbit when I kick Uranus Girls grip my cock, I take em out to their movies so my dick aint soft Ya Faimes also watching the chicks flic, calls all girls just flick him off I got the jive & i'm mack, i'm a star and bitches striven for Jack We all get our 15 minutes of fame ...but Faime's girl can only hope for 5 at the max! I thought this was the punch of the battle vs Like you eating stiff food, you like taking it hard to the neck... so I ain't talkin bout MCs spittin on you. . ....when I say they put they bars in ya neck! Claiming you selling drugs to folks n peeps, you a fraud. the last bag you gave out... was fulla groceries on ya job! The whole 24 lines you dropped was the lamest and worst. cause the only quotes you had... was my name in your verse! Close battle but i thought jack had more quotables.. v/Jack
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10-01-06, 08:35 AM | #12 | ||||
The Saviour
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IP: E633 9937
JTR wins 5-0.
JTR wins (17-7) Faime S. Quotez loses (2-1) |
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