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The Scholar

im innn yooooo gooodd luckk you to you 2

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The Scholar

Yooo wats goood

Yo, faimes a herb that should eat my fists
dude aint the sharpest tool in the shed;
But he should go find it and cut his wrists
This cat sucks at rappin,compared to my peers,his skills dissappear
I told him to juss drop his ugly 16, so he dumped his girl of 3 years
Quit flowin dogg u goin against the hardest
only people on Myspace accept u as an artist
Cuz last time u was ballin I had u lookin the fool
Faime was laughin all the way to the bank;
becuz I told him to juss keep his fuckin cool
To me the hospital is like Hollywood, they are kinda the same
I'll put Quotez in emergency,and leave only 15 minutes of Faime
Make it look easy , when i blow out Quotez like old speakers
and leave S dot all scuffed up like a pair of your old sneakers
How much do i have to take before this actor admit hes fake,
if i ever gave faime a shot, it would be followed by a wake
Beat this kid till he resembles the trees in my dutch
Alot of blue, a little bit of purple, and all broken up

You're a kind, sensitive guy, Son, full of passion and honest, dawg.
so yeah, I'd say you're pretty nice... when rapping is not involved!
I'm not callin you broke just cause you ain't got alotta chips or nothin.
cause ya pockets ain't empty. .
....if you counting the lent as somethin!
Drug pretender... walkin around like you smokin haze and piff again.
when the only way you 'burning trees'...
is setting flames to Timberlands!


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Yo, faimes a herb that should eat my fists
dude aint the sharpest tool in the shed;
But he should go find it and cut his wrists
This cat sucks at rappin,compared to my peers,his skills dissappear
I told him to juss drop his ugly 16, so he dumped his girl of 3 years
To me the hospital is like Hollywood, they are kinda the same
I'll put Quotez in emergency,and leave only 15 minutes of Faime
How much do i have to take before this actor admit hes fake,
if i ever gave faime a shot, it would be followed by a wake


v/Sonny he had one more quote than the other guy, good battle

I'm not callin you broke just cause you ain't got alotta chips or nothin.
cause ya pockets ain't empty. .
....if you counting the lent as somethin!
Drug pretender... walkin around like you smokin haze and piff again.
when the only way you 'burning trees'...
is setting flames to Timberlands!


VS


This cat sucks at rappin,compared to my peers,his skills dissappear
I told him to juss drop his ugly 16, so he dumped his girl of 3 years
To me the hospital is like Hollywood, they are kinda the same
I'll put Quotez in emergency,and leave only 15 minutes of Faime
How much do i have to take before this actor admit hes fake,
if i ever gave faime a shot, it would be followed by a wake

All in all i'ma have to say this was a very close battle... Faime i dunno whats been up with you lately you been losin to some shit lately like you aint tryin your harderst or nuttin...

anyways ima have to vote for sunny for having better quoatbales and a more consistant verse

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rug pretender... walkin around like you smokin haze and piff again.
when the only way you 'burning trees'...
is setting flames to Timberlands!

v.s.

This cat sucks at rappin,compared to my peers,his skills dissappear
I told him to juss drop his ugly 16, so he dumped his girl of 3 years
To me the hospital is like Hollywood, they are kinda the same
I'll put Quotez in emergency,and leave only 15 minutes of Faime
How much do i have to take before this actor admit hes fake,
if i ever gave faime a shot, it would be followed by a wake

overall sonny killed this. f'real

v/Sonny

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Yo, faimes a herb that should eat my fists
dude aint the sharpest tool in the shed;
But he should go find it and cut his wrists
This cat sucks at rappin,compared to my peers,his skills dissappear
I told him to juss drop his ugly 16, so he dumped his girl of 3 years

To me the hospital is like Hollywood, they are kinda the same
I'll put Quotez in emergency,and leave only 15 minutes of Faime


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Faime

Don't say you walk with trey pounds and who gon get clapped, geek.
cause the only Trey you handled. .
....was the dude you went against last week!


ya gotta agree with spul dimebags killed this...faime had lotta those you could only this or could only do this if you....got kinda old man....sunny had couple fresh idea that sharpest tool line was nice and ugly cd gave me a chuckle...

vote-dimebagz

Don't say you walk with trey pounds and who gon get clapped, geek.
cause the only Trey you handled. .
....was the dude you went against last week!

vs.

Yo, faimes a herb that should eat my fists
dude aint the sharpest tool in the shed;
But he should go find it and cut his wrists
This cat sucks at rappin,compared to my peers,his skills dissappear
I told him to juss drop his ugly 16, so he dumped his girl of 3 years
To me the hospital is like Hollywood, they are kinda the same
I'll put Quotez in emergency,and leave only 15 minutes of Faime

Faime, your flow is fine. What is bringing you down weekly is your concepts. They aren't bad, but they are too bland and obvious. Try workin' more on getting those creative juices going of yours. Trey personal was good, do more like that. Sonny, u came pretty inconsistent.. that's kinda always been ur downfall, but dawg u had some nice lines, those 3 i quoted were pretty solid. 16 line was my fave of the battle. I think u got this.

Vote - Sonny Dimebags

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Don't say you walk with trey pounds and who gon get clapped, geek.
cause the only Trey you handled. .
....was the dude you went against last week!

Vs

Yo, faimes a herb that should eat my fists
dude aint the sharpest tool in the shed;
But he should go find it and cut his wrists
This cat sucks at rappin,compared to my peers,his skills dissappear
I told him to juss drop his ugly 16, so he dumped his girl of 3 years
Quit flowin dogg u goin against the hardest
only people on Myspace accept u as an artist
How much do i have to take before this actor admit hes fake,
if i ever gave faime a shot, it would be followed by a wake

slaughter mayne

v/sonny

See, I stopped smokin a long time ago, began to say raps viciously.
but now Kemp giving me Dimebags?.. This just bring back memories! Lol..
decent enough idea.. but you haven't worded this into a punch
You're a kind, sensitive guy, Son, full of passion and honest, dawg.
so yeah, I'd say you're pretty nice... when rapping is not involved!
rhyme is forced as hit
You'll never shine, just leave, none of your punchline's succeed.
ya bars are like 'books about throwing watches away'...
a waste of time to read!
nah
I'm not callin you broke just cause you ain't got alotta chips or nothin.
cause ya pockets ain't empty. .
....if you counting the lent as somethin!
ehh
Don't say you walk with trey pounds and who gon get clapped, geek.
cause the only Trey you handled. .
....was the dude you went against last week!
not bad
Drug pretender... walkin around like you smokin haze and piff again.
when the only way you 'burning trees'...
is setting flames to Timberlands!
nah.. i've seen this sort of thing done b4
You need practice the most, cause your keys are just bare, lame.
and only way 'Dimebags'll elevate'... is taking weed on an airplane!
decent concept.. but the way you've approached it just doesn't work for me.

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Yo, faimes a herb that should eat my fists
dude aint the sharpest tool in the shed;
But he should go find it and cut his wrists
cool opener
This cat sucks at rappin,compared to my peers,his skills dissappear
I told him to juss drop his ugly 16, so he dumped his girl of 3 years
not bad
Quit flowin dogg u goin against the hardest
only people on Myspace accept u as an artist
blah
Cuz last time u was ballin I had u lookin the fool
Faime was laughin all the way to the bank;
becuz I told him to juss keep his fuckin cool
nah
To me the hospital is like Hollywood, they are kinda the same
I'll put Quotez in emergency,and leave only 15 minutes of Faime
i've seen this sort of thing used on him before
Make it look easy , when i blow out Quotez like old speakers
and leave S dot all scuffed up like a pair of your old sneakers
meh
How much do i have to take before this actor admit hes fake,
if i ever gave faime a shot, it would be followed by a wake
nah
Beat this kid till he resembles the trees in my dutch
Alot of blue, a little bit of purple, and all broken up
decent

v/ Sonny.