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10-24-06, 06:01 PM
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you remind me to much of a female version of 50 on this. Your flow works and shit on the beat. The hook is catchy fa sho, it needs a better effect though. Your 2nd verse was my favorite, lyrics was hottest on it. Flow picked up a bit, and ya delivered it hotter. overall I thought the track was decent, you need more emotion though just try work on that. ut yea nice job Yvonne.
rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...993#post3096993
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10-26-06, 11:33 PM
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ahha wuddup yv umm aiight the beat...kinda simple? not really feelin it the chorus. pretty cool kinda catchy. aiight ur verse comes in. kinda laid back, sounds like u were secretly recording while ur parent were sleepin or somethin pretty cool tho chorus again. catchy 2nd verse. this ones alot better. better flow overall pretty decent track ur getting better. |
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