alrighty, I like the intro of this beat. Can tell ya gonna go deep with somin you know. Oh yea I love this beat, nice choice. I like ya hook, very catchy and emotional. Very emotional which was a good thing. Your verse is good, I like ya lyrics though I'd prefer you to go deeper and talk bout the life of fighting for survive cuz thats what the hook sounds like. But what you did with ya verses was good anyway, fits the song. Your flow is good and emotion is good. nice deliverying it too. I like this track hellla man. good job

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