i was feelin this mah dude. you had an original type of format for ya verse. i liked how you had it like the guy was thinkin to himself in the verse. Ya flow was pretty good. i guess you were just trynna keep it nice n simple to get the story across. and alotta mc's dont know how ot telll a story anymore. but only thing i would do is still keep one or two punches in there just to keep it interesting ya dig?

holla at me on my shit...the links r in the sig mah dude........

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Lick Shots=Hitchcock feat Paul Cain and The Sick One
Opposite of Cold= The Cartel
Dear Others=Hitchcock
Kill That Static=Hitchcock