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Old 10-27-06, 10:25 PM   #1
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Talking NEW SHIT!!!!!!! ****I Can't Believe Enygma**** MIXTAPE TRACK!!!!!!!
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Old 10-27-06, 10:31 PM   #2
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ths shit hot son. i'll leave more feed lately. but this some sexy shit son. f'real..... *wipes off jizz from computer screen*
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Old 10-28-06, 02:49 AM   #3
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i love that beat. nice 1st verse... lyrics are dope an flow is flawless... i dont like them guns, they need panned more an need to be more quiet. chorus is nice, pretty much the same as the original. verse 2 is also nice, but lyrics arent as good at 1st verse. verse 3 the weakest in my opinion. but its still good. very nice, all track is done with percision.

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Old 10-28-06, 06:47 AM   #4
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Listenin'....

OOH yuppppppp this is the sample that was hot....

haaa flow is tightt...mulits are working...energy is there...breath control is hot 2...this is good dawg...didn't fall off much....liike how u spun the hookk....still sound like nigga lmao but still this is HAWT...

im feelin it, but doesn't your first single have to be on an exclusive beat?...:S

holla back can u rtf too:

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Old 10-28-06, 07:15 AM   #5
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oh beat is tight!

wow..you got a dope flow on this..hahaha hook is cool!..lol

you got a good presence on this...idk what to say went wrong with this..it's just cool!..rhyme schemes made it cool and made ur flow and cofidence on this dope!...

and gd luck on ur mixtape!


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Old 10-28-06, 01:24 PM   #6
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Word....thanks for the feed people
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Old 10-28-06, 01:56 PM   #7
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HAHAHAHA!!! kinda scary

intro works. i guess.

beat is cool. i always liked this beat.

haha..i like how you kicked this off. good prescence. i like how you did this. delivery is real cool. this sounds like some straight mixtape stuff.

hook is kinda played. sounds kinda...not good.

verse 2 kinda fell off from the first. lyrics are better though.


honestly this is a cool song. nothing i would listen to personally. it actually sounds like this song was just for fun or a joke or something. the one thing i did like was how you switched up the flow and didnt bore me with the same one throughout the song.
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Old 10-28-06, 04:04 PM   #8
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This is definately your style..flow wise and multi wise and ummmm UPBEAT wise definately good shit hear nice to see your solo shit commin together
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Old 10-29-06, 03:27 AM   #9
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Listening...

What the hell is this beat from? Ohhh...Midnight Club II...dope shit.

Verse comes in...flow is really nice, flawless actually. Good shit. Delivery is nice, quality is pretty good.

Lol you kinda bit the concept of the hook...but its cool.

Hot track man. Keep it up.

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Old 10-29-06, 05:05 PM   #10
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Thanks man.....uppin
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Old 10-29-06, 06:39 PM   #11
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nice track. as much as i hate when ppl recycle instrumentals like this, i like it. hook is very played out, but still works for the concept. first verse i was amazed at the flow, and even tho not original at all (complete flow pattern as original song that eminem used), it sounds good. everything seemed good and liked the extra sounds added to instrumental to liven it up.

good soundin track. is this goin on the OYD mixtape?
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Old 10-29-06, 07:30 PM   #12
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flow & delivery is nice, lyrics is str8, the beat is nice, quality is str8, over-all nice peice keep it up.
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Old 11-01-06, 01:23 PM   #13
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lol, yea this beat is nasty.....lol @ this hook.......nice nitty gritty nygma...like hearing that shit.....lol @ trash bin......hooks illy man....lol "im broke as fuck, buy me CD" good stuffstealin real hair LOLOLOL.....ur wild man.....lol....this song is the shit
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Old 11-02-06, 07:26 PM   #14
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Thanks for the feed
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Old 11-03-06, 02:48 PM   #15
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you did relaly good on this lyrics n flow wise for real, the only craticisim i have on this is you start to sound a lil too animated, like your more joking then being serious but then go back to being serious....i unno, thats all but yea keeping your shit upped.....rtf on my random verse
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