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Old 11-10-06, 03:48 PM   #1
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Power bomb him in the dirt and have Stanza busted n' throwin up mud
You'd think he was gettin jumped in a gang,way he was throwin up blood
^THE GRAPHIC NATURE OF THIS MADE IT OK FOR ME
Im shady,I'll cut his cars breaks just to kill this kid
Like Eminem,way I'm makin Stan drive of a bridge
^DECENT NAMEPLAY I GUEESS


V/ Sonny

Weak battle. Alotta Stanza’s punches just didn’t make any Logical sence like the Keys getting bored thing
How the fuck does Keys get bored? The step your game up play station thing was played and
The kick the casket over closer coulda been better had that been reworded to something making
Some sence. Sonny I’ve seen a lot better from him. His lines wasn’t that hot either but he had e-nuff to win this one.
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Old 11-10-06, 04:21 PM   #2
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Nah, this cat should spit for millions,earn him a check
and jump when he raps......... a rope around his neck
Power bomb him in the dirt and have Stanza busted n' throwin up mud
You'd think he was gettin jumped in a gang,way he was throwin up blood
Im shady,I'll cut his cars breaks just to kill this kid
Like Eminem,way I'm makin Stan drive of a bridge

^ the wording was a bit awkward in the second one, but haven't seen the idea before so i quoted it. your verse was top heavy on threats, but you came a lot better than he did so:


v/ sonny.
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