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Big Slick ft Mack Messiah

Hahaha finally got a new mixer so this was just me fuckin around

Wrote recorded and mixed in an hour lemme know what ya'll

Ace = Wax

Mack Messiah on the 2nd verse

J Meezie on the Intro/Outro

*Droppin Feedback now will edit with links in a few*

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235986
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236639

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This is nice. Tight beat and both of you ride it well. Good stuff overall, not much else to say, just a nice track.

Ace- came in nice ya flow is on point......like da mulits dope shit man.......ya quality is nice too man....
Mack - came in nice too, ridin da beat nice too, da lyrics are reall man.....feelin this.......

Overall - both emcees were nice on da track only thing i can say is add a hook and take out intro/outro..........nice drop........

pz

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bump this......

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Up up and away...

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Damn who's dick you have to suck to get some feedback?

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Thanks man... uppin this

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ah....feelin the beat.....alot

like the flow so far.....coo multis....hehe coo emotions.....

better multis.....

feelin the crown line.....

the 2nd dude....sounds like kweli a lil......likes his flow.....delivery and emotion is coo too....max a 8 line feelin.....



quality is coo i likes the quality...this was a decent track overall.....like this is on some real shyt.....real hip hop? yessur.....it is...keep it alive man
fuck the haters

quality is good

flows/rhymes were quality and I appreciated it

beat is slick

Hook? was there one? not too memorable

good piece


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lol... ummm... there was no hoook... thx for the feed i guess lol...

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beat's kinda dre-ish. like mostly dre-like with some underground elements in there liek that vocal piece.
first verse, could use some EQing, specially in your mids. flow's ok, nothing wrong with it, just doesn't jump out at me. same can be said for the lyrics. they'd matter more if they had more body in the mids. some creative lines in there, obviously not a tard who picked up a mic, an emcee with a brain.

second verse, a hook woulda been nice instead of a leap-in transition but the track's cool. my feedback for thos one's pretty much identical to the feed or the first so i'll save us both the trouble. you guys make a good team, obviously got a good chemistry on the mic.

cool mixtape track. some better mixing and a hook would have made it more of an album track


uno

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that shit wuz fuckin dope. that beats illy, werd

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