ok here ya go, now drop your lines

ok les do this

INTRO
Iverson,
I have your son hes being held ransome w/ a gun placed on his tongue, hear his breathe its form one lung I squashed the other snathed his brother and __ the mother.......


Ima dismantle your car door handle, while your bitch is still in, toss gas on her ass an put the keys in the ignition.//
flip the switches to keep the these bitches wishin they would have listened to these fuckin snitches when they was bitchin, talkin about "somebody gonna find your body fishin"
so listen when your whole mold explodes but the car door and you see your partners pose froze on the floor
you know who the fuck didi it so quit it
you cant fuck w this shit admit it I just did it better than you could ever, but whatever cuz my shits so clever Im better,
you better go get a sweater cuz my flows so cold it'll leave you body n whole state of mind froze from your head to your toes
everybody knows I just left you a JON DOE

OsIrIs420

omg. dat wuz whack. damn homie tuff luck iveson03 iz gonna fuckin eat u!

you cant say shit bitch

nigga if dats da shit ur dropin ill fuckin eat u bitch.

haha, and by the way, if your wondering, i just got home, i wrote that shit at my friends then i had to walk home in this god damn snow, and you will see what i have to say

Ok Listen Up:

Ima call you Johnny Ruiz, you dont think that you can be beat do ya
I might only be a lightweight, But people call me Roy Jones Jr.
So we all know what the outcome of this fights gonna be
That fight went the distance, but Im endin this one in 3
Cause each punchline I drop is like an uppercut to the chin
And by the time this one is ova you'll never want to battle again
And maybe you should go to a psychic person's place and enter
And she'll say theres a place that helps with wack rhymes, The Wackness Emergancy Center
So check that place out dawg, cause even other people say your raps is whack
Ive seen better freestyles from people when they've been smokin the crack
You ever wonder why whenever you rap that people always laugh in your face
Its because your rhymes are funnier than watching a fat kid run in a race
And I still dont understand why you were so anxious to battle vs. me
My rhymes is oviously better, something even a blind man could see
And by the way i dont even have a son, so im not sure what your INTRO proves
that should be my intro, cause by the look of things, you fuck anything that moves

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poll vote - Iverson03

much better verse. simple as that

thanks for the vote chaos, anyone else??

ma vote goes to iverson03 better verse had better punches but his just took it overall just a better flow and rhyme. holla 1

Yep. Iverson03.

o well fuck it I admit I should have directed it more toward you
I'm up for a rematch whenevr you are

but its first to 5 votes right?