Nice sample in the beat. Ight, drum pattern drops in. Really Feeling the beat. Just waitin for you to come in........

Ight, you come in. First off, turn your vocals up, i could barely hear you at the beginning. You intro to your voice was on point, but the verse itself seemed to be stressed instead of released freely. For example, there were times where you didnt finish the last word at the end of the bar because you was taking a breath for the next one. THats a big NO NO, cause it fucks with your flow, and throws the listener off if they are concentrating on what your saying. You might want to consider taking out some words so you can achieve this. Overall decent track, wish it was longer so i could get a better feel of your style. But dont just cut the song off like that at the end, lol.

7.5/10

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