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Old 01-05-07, 06:49 PM   #1
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NEW M.A.S.!!! "No More"-Zone Out, SPuL, Prah'Ject (APEX PRODUCTIONS) (GUARANTEED RTF)
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WORD SON!! YOU KNOW IT!!!


Intro: SPuL/Zone Out
First verse: Zone Out
Hook: SPuL
Second verse: SPuL
Third verse: Prah'ject
Outro: SPuL
Beat: Apex Productions

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2. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238838
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Old 01-05-07, 07:35 PM   #2
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This isn't bad man. I like the sample to the beat a lot. Pretty creative. Anyway, First verse from Zone was pretty nice. He comes with some nice wordplay. Flow was nice too. Hook comes in and I think its missing a little something. Just a little something. Like right after hiding and rising or whatever it is you should be yelling something in the background or something. But yeah, when SPuL comes in I just don't think he fits with the other two verses too well. He sounds good on the hook, but the verse is almost the opposite of what Zone and Prah were bringing in a sense of flow and delivery and shit. It wasn't bad, just kinda clashed. Prah comes in real nice. lol....was this a diss to Teamone or did Prah just go off on em. But yea, good shit man.


Overall it was a pretty good song. Keep it up MASers
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Old 01-05-07, 07:46 PM   #3
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you think you can put this in rotation?
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Old 01-05-07, 08:00 PM   #4
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word that'd be sexy and shit big nyg
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Old 01-05-07, 08:09 PM   #5
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No prob fellas......I could use the variety
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This is a pretty coo track fam, Feelin the beat, Nice sample aswell!, ... Zone came pretty nice he had some good lines and wordplay, .... SPuL ya verse was ok not as strong as the first dude but it was still good, The 3rd dude was actually my fav for some reason, Overall good track fam, stay up, ...`1
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Thanks y'all and naw enygma jus a lil hit..to the bitch ass niggas of team bum...HOLLA
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beat's hot

spul sounds soft on the come in. i dunno if its the mic or the mixing, but just doesn't have impact. same on the adlibs. zone comes in strong. had a lyrical and flow flat spot in the verse about 4-6 bars in that lasted for about 4 bars, then got back on track again. hooks hot, i just don't like the mixing on it, sounds flat and hollow. spuls lyrics in the second verse are nice, well thought out, well flowed, well written, i just don't like the delivery. too sing-y. sounds like you'er singing the lyrics not rappin em which is a shame. prah comes in strong, just the mixing is flat as fuck, voice needs to pop and sound more dynamic on the beat, makes it easier to listen to and keeps the attention more. i mean the volumes are right, just the mixing isn't. and it's not the vocal recording, it's flat spots in the mic and in the mixing. prah's ender on the verse should have been more impactful and close the song out on a dropkick instead of a jab.

its a "good" song now, but with adressing those minor issues the shit woulda been straight up fire. a cuttable single for sure. and that's real talk as always.

out of curiosity, what mics do you guys use?
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beat's hot

spul sounds soft on the come in. i dunno if its the mic or the mixing, but just doesn't have impact. same on the adlibs. zone comes in strong. had a lyrical and flow flat spot in the verse about 4-6 bars in that lasted for about 4 bars, then got back on track again. hooks hot, i just don't like the mixing on it, sounds flat and hollow. spuls lyrics in the second verse are nice, well thought out, well flowed, well written, i just don't like the delivery. too sing-y. sounds like you'er singing the lyrics not rappin em which is a shame. prah comes in strong, just the mixing is flat as fuck, voice needs to pop and sound more dynamic on the beat, makes it easier to listen to and keeps the attention more. i mean the volumes are right, just the mixing isn't. and it's not the vocal recording, it's flat spots in the mic and in the mixing. prah's ender on the verse should have been more impactful and close the song out on a dropkick instead of a jab.

its a "good" song now, but with adressing those minor issues the shit woulda been straight up fire. a cuttable single for sure. and that's real talk as always.

out of curiosity, what mics do you guys use?

word word word appreciate the dope feedback man.

I use AKG 3000 mic
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