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Old 01-12-07, 03:47 PM   #1
Faime S. Quotez
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Final.
Ripping wor`s ahgo`, In the league im zooming right by whores
An` the reason u dont See D`s <-- s'cuz no one will buy yours
This nerd`s a drug addict, Wordz thinks weed and coke is coo`
So u tryed to take wyte and align - of his verse merked ya two
But fuck life, i was raised from druggy`s and dealer`s in herds
So basically i came from nothing
. . . and yes, im ashamed my mother is wordz

vs.

InDeath
He got Solo's effection n support, but that can only hurt duke
Coz if he's out writing predictions....
....I hope for ur sake he's writing a verse too
My left hook'll blow ur spine, coz faggets love to act brave
---->But after I ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^....
....even batman'll be jelouse from how I make ur back cave
Son u in danger, u lack the status to be a groove 'n' classic
But I'll help pull u through...the passanger seat window n onto moving traffic
^Could've worded that better.
This kid aint the truth, I dont believe when this geek may say so
'Coz last week he faced a no show...n almost lost by K.O.


InDeath, had more quotables. The "moving traffic" line could've been worded better to hit more, but was a good concept. Final wasn't consistent enough to take the win. He needed more like the ones I quoted.

V/ InDeath
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