^^ hahaha nick i know i need to elevate i never said i was the best or even said that im better then you but im not trash and im not on here for friends or anything this is just to take up my spare time while just trying to elevate and i will try for any battle leauge u guys have and it dont matter to me if i make it or not so HA!

P.S you honestly lost that match with topnotch thou........
and that wordplay was mad forced....
u should take my criticism to make you wanna drop better not to talk shit back....

My verse took 5 minutes, stuff off the top of my head (THAT DIDN'T GO AT NO 1 PERSON CAUSE SINGLING OUT SOMEBODY IS COMPLETLY DIFFERENT)on the spot cause I aint see nobody spit nothing special. I've seen freestyles be better than some cats that took they time and carefully wrote shit so I aint trippin. I aint gont waste nothing I could use in a real battle in this thread. If niggaz think I'm 2004 or whatever then set a thread up and get at me fucka.

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yo TEF, yo shit was hot on da sneak yo. aye, join up on Letsbeef.com where "'04" talent gets u recognition. trust me yo, yo shit was hot, im tellin u if u get on letsbeef u'll wreck without a doubt. once u get on letsbeef look up Hot_Stylez iight? got a crew spot for u 2. 1

same thing for u Ransum. people'll actually b like oh shit off yo verses on letsbeef. jump on hoe n u'll get real competition and real exposure...real talk yo. same thing for u, get on dat bitch n drop me a message on my page, my name on der is Hot_Stylez and i got a spot fo ya.

Ransum and TEF are both TOO GOOD for your site.

But, if they want to join up, more power to them.

I'm done with this argument.

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I will actually say one more thing though to you people from letsbeef. This argument was pointless and so it breaks down like this... REAL CRITICISM!


If you ask a lot of strictly text battlers, they will tell you the same thing. Your text verses use the "Audio-Style". That used to be acceptable back in 2004. This is why I call your style the 2004 Style. You are writing a text verse based on how you would drop on a mic. No doubt, if we was dropping on a mic and you put your shit down and I put a text-style verse down I would get laughed at and owned to shit.

Text battling has evolved in the past 3 years into a style of its own, breaking away from the audio-esque text verses. Whilst some sites still deem an audio text verse acceptable and think it is dope, sites like RapVerse, RapBattles, RapMusic, ProjectRhyme, B-Boys, BragginWrites.... they don't.

AUDIO and TEXT are two completely different styles. Text is all about wording, concepts, punches/personals. Obviously, multi rhyming becomes a factor because if you have it with fresh punches and dope wordplay you'll have an even better verse. It also increases your flow and shit. But, flow and multies fall below the main aspects of a text verse.

A text verse with dope wordplay and punches but an average flow and rhyme scheme will beat out a text verse with a dope flow and multi rhyme scheme but played wordplay and shitty ass punches.

You have your style, it is still strong on your site so I can't blame you I guess for thinking it is the shit, because it is on YOUR site. But on this site, Text and Audio are separate and do not blend in any way, thus, your style on this site will be frowned upon by most.

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i could care less about this letsbeef vs RV beef, as long as dudes dont pull me in it like real talk mentioning my name in that other thread

^^^^^^^^word.........

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