i got the same vibe from this as mindstate did...very basic rhyming pattern, no multis in there or anything, see a few metas tho so thats cool...no emotion to it really tho, thats why peeps thinking it aint real ya get me...gotta get a proper vibe from it man...flowed well i felt tho man...thats what a lot of peeps trip up on...i know its hard to really see a flow on paper, but u could flow this shit easy..good work tho, i can see u got something there man, u just gotta work at it, keep rhyming, keep elevating..u will get there boy...