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Old 02-22-07, 08:42 PM   #1
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LOL @ using the pharcyde hook thing...I'm not sure if thats your voice but lol...lol beats dope yup...the hook just aint really fittin for me, your volume is way liuder than your verse. Your verse sounded like you was trying to be to mainstream though your flow was smooth and ya lyrics was coo. Grammitix haven't heard you in a minute duke. flow was trying to stay consistant you was switchin it up here n there like you usually did. your lyrics was hot and ya delivery was good. Your volume could be upped though. overall pretty decent track yall.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...573#post3145573
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