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Old 03-05-07, 09:56 AM   #1
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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Smack ya lip, ya dumb bitch, i'm feelin crazy quick
cuz in this battle i'm leavin ya head over heels like a frontflip
Nah, wasn't feeling this
U lackin a punch, that gangster shit is played whore
Real talk is the real pussy type.......like cats wit keyboards
It's nice, but played though, I created that bar back in 04

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Real Talk:

Dog, I grind and hustle. Dat punchline was weaker den Ghandi's muscles
Da only chips you eva get in ya hand be Wize and ruffled
Nah, chips are on SHOULDERS not hands
At times when my ghat speak, I'll spread ya mind on da backseat
You shoulda posted a pic of ya avy cuz ya rhymin is ass checks ........
Is alright, but like I said mad played and came out in 04

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Old 03-05-07, 01:06 PM   #2
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Smack ya lip, ya dumb bitch, i'm feelin crazy quick
cuz in this battle i'm leavin ya head over heels like a frontflip
This is what I call just a "threat" punch. It says what your going to do to him, but thats about it, it doesn't actually punch him. This is also kinda too basic

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Dog, I grind and hustle. Dat punchline was weaker den Ghandi's muscles
Da only chips you eva get in ya hand be Wize and ruffled
u talkin' about a chip on his shoulder? I dunno why u said hand, this didn't really make sense
At times when my ghat speak, I'll spread ya mind on da backseat
You shoulda posted a pic of ya avy cuz ya rhymin is ass checks ........
Kinda simple, but okay i guess

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U lackin a punch, that gangster shit is played whore
Real talk is the real pussy type.......like cats wit keyboards
Better than ur first bar, but type/keyboard lines are really played. I used one a few years ago and a lot of other people have too

Eh, battle wasn't that great, could go either way, but I liked the ass cheeks line the best here so I'll give it to Real Talk

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