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Old 03-14-07, 04:10 PM   #1
tiggobitties
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sureloc-beginning seemed bad but it got better as i read on...good wordplay throughout the verse, flow could be improved..i liked the closer

trouble-nice verse throughout the entire thing...also had good wordplay (slightly better and more effective than surelocs)...also a good flow...you also had some hard hitting punches and personals

id say trouble took this in every category, although wordplay was a close one

v/troublesome
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Old 03-14-07, 09:58 PM   #2
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Sureloc Holmes: didnt like the intro, but it definitely progressed as it went on, flow was really awkward, and some lines were really stretched... word play was real good, and the closer was funny too...good verse...

Troublesome: Flow was on point, punches were really good, and i really enjoyed almost every line, closer was pretty good too....

vote:Troublesome... i think sureloc had the easier task of insulting the US, but Troublesome did a real good job with his topic, and took this...
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