^^That is predictable, whether one-syllable rhyming or not.

I actually thought that flow worked pretty decent on this track. I was feeling most everything bout your verse except the delivery and presence, the lyrics were okay. Seems like you just faded out in some parts then came back. Last time I heard you, you were more confident on the mic. I say re-record it again, now that you might know it like the back of your hand. And fix those minor things. And in comes Trip, I like your delivery on this track more than other ones as well as your flow except in one spot towards the end of your verse it seemed like too much space, i think it was after the wheel chair line. The line I don't like is the bye stander one... Like it was stretching it. Everything else seemed fine.

Not bad fellas...
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