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my life to the mic with a dream of being seen/ sound n' style clean with the lyrics that I bring/ broken down to a mathmatic, spitting hot like a pyromatic/ call me a pyromaniac, brainiac fresh without static/ freestyles on automatic, with a beat that's bangin/ shred ya head n leave it danglin, from a noose hangin/ hand round yo neck stranglin, fuckin' up your shit/ after i'm through wit'it, ya gonna need a medic kit/ jobs finished, done, now i'm on the run/ only protection is my six shots in my gun/ Untitled2: stick round a while as i unleash my style/ the pile on the gravel road went on for a whole mile/ and no one complained, cause to us it was beauty/ the rain stained the ground all around us till around two thirty/ too nerdy he could never be into rap, the drout stopped/ but he had dropped out, picked up a mic n tried to rock out/ his mind was simplistic but his flow was complicated/ weather or not they understood him, he had got to make it/ n' be real away from the fake shit, weak shit like its con-stipated/ but he lives dreams n thinks everything rap related/ Freestyle1: this bitch stepped up, as a pig dressed up/ said step to me and you'll probably get messed up/ with his back pressed up against the wall/ took a bat to his face like he was the rock standin' tall/ ready for a brawl any where at any time/ i'm explosive like columbine, 'cept I use the mic to rhyme/ ur like frankensteins monster, very large in size/ but i'll deystroy you like transformers, robots in disguise/ Freestyle2: Pockets stickin' out now, always got the cash/ can always afford a stash, of only the finest hash/ get stoned at home, kick back n' watch mash/ white trash? nah, I got money like kevin nash/ n' I'm dashin' like austin powers, big like twin towers/ never had to work a job at nine to five hours/ yet could always afford a date flowers, movie, and a meal/ livin' life real, won the lottery, what a great deal/
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240743
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IP: 09BF CB64
Nice How U Roll Those Words Off At The Start, Sum Played Concepts But Revelent............ U Need To Work Harder On Those Metaphors... They Good But They Lackin Somethin....... Keep Spittin As Ever
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Thanks for the feed man, very much appreciated.
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IP: A9A4 8C3F
Pretty Dope Shyt Mayne...Solid Flow...
Pretty Basic Though..You Need Up Your Vocab....And Some More Multies... To Make It More Complex...AND SOME WORDPLAY then you'll be iight Keep Elevatin ~1~
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