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^Click on "Grey Skies: 4 my enemies"

Beat: Mister KA
Hook: Pre-packaged...sample from the song "California Dreaming" by the Mamas and the Papas
Verses: 1-3 Q

Concept: I started off writing about adversity in my life due to the title of this track, "Grey Skies." However, as I started writing the 3rd verse, I noticed that it took on a diss tone. So, I decided to spit the 3rd verse I wrote as my 1st verse and flipped the order. This is what resulted.


Holla


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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241197
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241186

Beat is cool. Ya delivery is nice, flow is cool. Lyrics were aight. U kinda like my friend, ya need 2 chill a little wit the ad libs. It seems like ur doin ad libs 4 every word that rhymes which kinda hurts your flow and makes it harder 2 understand the lyrics.

haha, i like this....the first verse has a good flow....dont kill the DUBS but drop them down a db, the leaves are brown n no, fall type line....shame haha....nah the brag shit works out for this tho...its like the world is against me, im fighting back alone.....ya know? its good shit....it all works....you n your ka beats, just killin em

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I'm def feelin the beat, KA knows what he's doin thats fa sure. I was def feelin your flow on this, but in the 2nd verse idk it sounds a lil rushed a bit. like you were trying to hard to flow fast enough to fit with the snare. like literally you were ahead of yourself. but your lyrics was dope fa sure, i was def feelin the production and overall the tracks pretty good Q, i take it my names in there? haha

rtf: "On A Quest"

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