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04-25-07, 11:04 AM
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my opinion this shit was toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo fuckin long... n not to say you cant spit hard..... this was really not my type of rhymin.. I would tell you its whack but I dont wanna seem to mean n have you thinkin that I know I'm better than you.... but man step it up... multi's would have help... a bigger vocab would help..... but hey you got ya own style all I can do is tell you how to use it
Stay Up Sin
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04-27-07, 12:15 AM
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IP:
Yea man I agree here,..you need to incorporate multi's..n it adds so much more to your rhymes n makes the flow so much smoother you know?..lol this was alrite,.pretty crazy though, keep it up. elevate
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