I'm liking the swag on the track, first verse was good, good flow didnt drop it once.
Hook was normal nothing great but it suit the purpose.
2nd verse was good, at times idk maybe im slow but couldnt keep up wit some of ur sentences lol
3rd verse again decent good
only thing i would say is at times ur voice is a little high pitched not sure if i feel it completely maybe id have to hear more tracks. and other than maybe just up the lyrics a bit.
feeling the beat, the concept and flow. I hate being a critic lol