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Old 05-30-07, 12:28 PM   #1
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flow was decent.. multis was decent...
a few played lines and few raw lines...
all around decent drop....

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Old 05-31-07, 03:23 PM   #2
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Yea needs alot of work..ya bars were strecthed, ya had some okay multi's..lyrics were blahh...there was no flow..and structure was bad.
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Old 06-02-07, 09:14 AM   #3
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exactly what homo said above me..lol he's gonna be pissed when he reads this. but uhh..yea needs some work..ya need to work on ya structure n flow dude..maybe sum better vocab
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