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Old 06-14-07, 01:42 AM   #1
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YO HONESTLY FUCK WHAT THEY WAS SAYING...
I thought it flow good man word up......
creativeness wasnt to impressive but you kept it going...
not that many punchline but you had a couple attemp's....
i feel like you can def get better man for-real just keep writing...

ya flow good... work on punches and metaphores word...

7.5 outta 10 not bad man....




can you give me feed back on my newest drop CALLED: DIG DEEP....

holla back one..
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