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Old 05-04-07, 11:14 PM   #1
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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=5309093
Old Jadakiss beat kiss ur ass good bye.
Did the hook sample myself. Other than that enjoy. ~1~


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Old 05-05-07, 01:48 PM   #3
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always like this beat...used it b4 actualy......

samples is pimp....a bit much tho...

quality not bad...but not great.....

voice is grimey.....lyrics iight...nuthing special either way....but not bad....them samples is a bit much still.....kinda tossed together...flows on....deffo potential...not bad @ all

good track
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Old 05-06-07, 11:53 PM   #4
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yea beat is sick man classic track..
samples is nice but yea u should of used more Ny heads and less lines but still nice..
liken that evil feel in ya verse.. my type of shit man.. different flow but i feel it..
nice track man nice sample too ..
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Old 05-07-07, 01:30 AM   #5
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pretty chill....i actually wasnt a fan of the samples...too long and a few didnt fit the beat much....but ya whole shit is pretty smooth...get ya quality game up...
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Old 05-07-07, 01:52 AM   #6
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i wish i new how to up my quality, right now i have cool edit pro and also use pro tools, if anyone can help out wit either in helpin learn how to mix better be very appreciated. and I did read countless number of times the guides on this site ..still cant get that warm sound yet...frustrated lol.
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Old 05-22-07, 06:48 PM   #7
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dope samples and beat...good voice, only thing quality wise would be turn vocals down...this is a ni9ce grimey song, im feelin it...id dub some shit or ad some libs or sumthin cuz some of the song sounds kinda empty....good shit tho dawg, you got some huge potential even tho youre shits already pretty nice...hit me up for a collab sometime lol...

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Old 06-13-07, 11:14 PM   #8
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ywea i alway like this beat.. beat is real nice.... okay intro was iight.... delivery is iight.. im fellin it.. grimey.. good shit.. flow good... lyrics nice.. holla at me for a track.. aim-classick86
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Old 06-14-07, 01:43 AM   #9
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samples were cool but too much intro was nice....a lil too echoey thou.....flow was sick in the first verse....lines was average......good for the topic.....hook again yeah i think its def cool but too much fit nicly but just a lil much.....second verse.....flows nice delivery is enjoyable....the cuss line was kinda filler but meh.........u had sum nice lines at the end bout gas an ish...........hook again..........flow nice again in third lines was agverage again....a lil simpleri found but that got you self a gun shit was hott u def werked the samples nicein there which isnt that easy but i just wasnt a fan of em
overall nice shit
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Old 06-14-07, 04:15 PM   #10
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....the beat was good.....the flow was smooth to...and the hook went well and smooth with the beat....good shit...~1~
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