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09-27-07, 11:40 PM | #1 | ||||||
Banned: Biting
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b-day nightmare...
IP: 50B8 17ED
its like no matter how hard u try u'r love always diss you
in my life so far... i dont think this world created enough tissue they wanna cry and leave all pissed with some sick-news then 2 hours later wanna hug up all close an say they miss you forget you... if you dont think about me now u'l forget later when u all drunk in the bar and trying to get on the elevator to get to the dancer floor... bump and grind like u wanna romance more go-ahead and dont think why u taking a chance for, make sure that pussy tight like a tense whore wanna come back home after a long night... then cuddle after a wrong fight when u know im so tight.. lipstic smear this dont fit like a lamp with a wrong light push shorty off my bed... like what the fuck im horney i want some head... hassatated then her neck lead... and didnt stop till her lips felt dead... then i smushed her head like what the fuck? smacked her with my cage like bitch spread ya leg's... scream im wilding but open up like go-ahead 1 stroke 2 stroke... shit a bit loser then usesual body started to shake... im about to cum... then shit got crusioual cuz after the 3ed scream.. i punch the bitch in the mouth saw the blood leak.. dont speak.. just get the fuck out the house not on my day so i, grab her hair... said u love me... she said yes.. well i dont care cuz when u was out last night bitch i was there in the back having a drink... asking myself what the hell is she doing 2 long years and a child... the night before a birth with a happy ending already ruin she beg me to stop but the hit came repetedly i said do you love me.. she waiting.. i said repeat to me... then she mumble i did.. i said dont lie bitch.. guess what im taking my kid she grab my leg so i kick the bitch off... grab the hammer then split her wig look at the pool of blood like what the fuck just happen i just seen my wify brain drop like i was crapp'in now im tearing out my eyes... witht he picture thought that kept relapsing the air i breath started gasping...closed my eyes and saw noting but white like a napkin felt a push by my side... saw her face with a present and ballon like whhha?.. danm i was just napp'ing in the back of my head im like i wish things never go right there cuz that would be the worst kind of birth-party nightmare... |
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09-28-07, 05:24 PM | #2 | ||||
-da prophit-
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IP: D732 E31C
dope shit.. kind of like u feeling alone or betrayed... i used to be good at these types of raps.. not so much anymore.. kinda faded out of it.. well it was a good story to read.. kept me hooked. nice word play... in some parts it was a lot like slims shit in one of his songs... dont rememeber which one tho.. but good shit i liked it..some good rhymes others basic... i know u can do better then that.. ive seen it..but guess u wasnt feeling it.. no doubt tho pretty good shit... keep comin...
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10-11-07, 12:40 PM | #3 | |||
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IP: 30B6 8894
You have 3 Days To Post 1 Or More Links In Order To Keep This Open Mic Open, According To New Rules. Do So Or This Will Be Closed & Moved.
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10-14-07, 06:26 AM | #4 | |||
сварливый
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IP: 30B6 8894
Closed, Moved And Stored.
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