ok piece, nothin special. but it atleast shows u have some talent somewhere, u just gotta focus ur words more and find somethin to actually rap about, this was very keystyle, try writting topics or shit like that, over-all not that bad and a decent read, also try rhyming better with better vocab and some inner multies.
keep droppin fam. uppin

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