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Old 02-25-08, 01:23 AM   #1
Brandon Cee
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Save Me

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The track is called "Save Me"

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Beat By Anno Domini.

Thanks for looking. Leave links and I'll get to your shit.
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Old 03-01-08, 08:47 PM   #2
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beat intro is setting this up to be a deep track, fuck this beats smooth.
Vocal claritys nice. could be slightly louder. Your dubs are blended perfect, raise your mids slightly.

Your 'Times' dub come across bit to loud, not EQ'd right or somthing.

Lyrics and mic presence is all good.

decent track.
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Old 03-01-08, 10:58 PM   #3
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this is a nice track...i like the beat for real....

the verses are nice with nice flow..this really sounds nice.....

the hook quality could be better..but its still nice...good track my man..
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Old 03-08-08, 11:09 PM   #5
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reachin for my shot wit no drinkin at all, good line. u doin some kinda reverb or sumin on ya verses vocals or sumin kinda weird. chorus should be singing or sumin rather than just talkin, make it catchier. and ya verses sound a bit like u talkin in places, chorus u must be goin for the talkin sound but idk why.
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