16 line max
5 votez to win
3-0 KO
u spit first
no crew, dr, hate, beef, or any otha bull

check in and drop ya shit

your not lyrically endowed, and with raps you post I'm amazed your still allowed
the fact that you did'nt get banned for your weak lyrics got me spellbound
I'm gonna K.O you in the first round then go to the RB castle to get crowned
I'm bringin lyrical atrocity when all your doin is showin signs of animosity
after this battle your whole crew will vanish like the lost city
I'm submergin you like atlantis so easy that I did'nt even have to plan this
your so bad at text and sex your girl wants to kill u like a praying mantis
quit usin the same old crusty material, those flows are like stale cherrio's cereal
this verse assassinates the emperor of your empire it's so imperial
It's certain that while I'm avertin your rhyme I'll be closin your crew like a curtain
so I don't mind if you start blurtin while I'm hangin out with your bitch flirtin
everyone know's that 5 minutes later my dick will be in her mouth squirtin
your a monkey with lyrical waste thats why I call you shit flinger
I'm spinnin your flows faster than a propeller like a basketball on my finger

damn dude, your fuckin laggin

what's the hold up? I put my verse down quick

scared!

that shit was nice homie!

thanks calibur

but what the fuck jay pana?
you said you would put your verse down on monday night at the latest
it's already tuesday
and don't say you were bizzy because I saw you on here last night
you had plenty of time to put your verse down

nice dawg, u sure u anit have dat writ´n down

I can't even vote cause of the crew thing.. but yo, you're pro'lly gonna win... nice spit..

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lol my bad i been madd bizee lately, i'll post later tonite when i get back from work...

oh and fiftycalibur...i'll murder u in a battle so don't come in this thread sayin i'm scared, fuckin herb

fuck it...

i'm bout to crush this wack textcee leavin him unseen as if i clammed~him~up/
if a prophet told him how much he'd lose they still couldn't add~them~up//(mathmatikal propheciez)

like ur east-west beef, ur flowz [/i]gettin~old[/i]/
i would say ur heatin thingz up but like in JerZ, ur flowz still gettin~cold//*

if i battled ur whole crew all i'd be doin iz countin my winz/
like tha ten commandmentz, claimin ur ill would be nuthin but a sin//

i would spit sixteen but i've already exploited hiz lack~of~skill/
even if hiz last name wuz smith he couldn't come back~like~will//

*he'z still on east-west beef and endz hiz postz wit "westside" most of tha time... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=2
^there'z tha link to prove it lol

vote jaypana.....

his verse was nicer...tha other guy wus 2 boring 2 basic n 2 wack.......jaypana kept his short n it hit way harder than tha other guyz

punches - jay
multis - jay
werdplay - jay
flow - jay
overall - jay

but vocab id giv 2 tha otha guy....but das all he had

ma vote goes to jay he had a better verse even tho it was short it came harder...chameleon urs was ok but very simple it wasnt up to par ...sry...

vote- jaypana

i agree wit x^
my vote=jay

how did he get votes?
jaypana's verse was fuckin weak as hell!!!! haha
nah I'm just talkin shit, it was alright I guess, whatever
but I can't see how people think he one this, I lyrically socked him in the face
come on folks, uppin for pole votes