yo i don't really do this typin shit, or act scary,
but my text game serious, they callin me Blackberry.
that shit that Nos said, like he readin my mind...
i'mma shed some light tonight while yall readin my rhymes.
so little homey fuck all the rest, i'mma quote K.R.S.
its all about peace, love, unity, and havin' fun
"these are the words... of KRS-ONE!"

a cypher is in order, RapVerse is silly sad
my lines turn that frown upside down like a titty flash
so lets cut out all the yappin, take it back to the roots
like it or not, this shit the motherfuckin truth.

bitches.


i know i text like i'm writing audio, it sounds good if you flow it but doesn't read good, but fuck it... i've never been a text rapper, this shit bigger than that criticism anyways, we just havin fun.

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what up o.m.b.??? lol. i didnt know that you were ter. i was wondering what you've been up to. i hope that all has been well with you on your side brutha, word.

good luck fam, handle it...


...the super

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Sup man... Yeah it's all good over here

Been doing some production, and I transferred to a degree in composition at university, so it looks like my life is headed in the direction of music... Which is cool.

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really depends whether your typing shit or writing hits
defiant spits or poetic magic with a catalyst
too many cats rappin adjectives, no fuckin with verbs
i do what i speak, battle me im crumpin with words
above the herds, in the stars
while you aim for the clouds, surpassed
by a god with a skill for the art
ill as a killers grill off the mark, n the charts?
i rip it appart ghost style, picture the cards
I could pull, but im too cool... amongst mostly fools
n blay, like it or not, this shit is the motherfuckin truth.

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^^^congrats brutha, hold it down.


esvee

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Originally Posted by Nick Fletcher. I don't drive an Eclipse, they're chickmobiles.

QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection???
ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE



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R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love.

That beat working out OMB?

Yeah I've been playing around with it a bit...

If you're gonna be online for a while I could probably mix down a quick version of it and show it to you in like 15-30 mins.

btw, that song is so dope.

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yeh Ill be online. Thats old school NZ music bro, bit of a classic from round my way.

Alright here's the kind of thing I've got going...

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It's still sort of rough, I'll do you a proper one if you want to use it.

Oh and btw ignore the guitar solo, that's just me being an idiot (been smoking weed..)

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Gat solos classic.

Maybe slower tempo, less of the original sound and more of a composed bassline n shit.
ahaha im typing this in your guitar solo, you trippy cunt. I think a slower tempo might go down well, aswell as like I said, less of the original coming through and more composed ish.


Delete that link bro, just so other cunts dont slim in on ideas n plans.

Yeah I can slow it down easy.

Hmm.. If what you mean by getting rid of the original sound is adding in a composed bassline, then I could probably do that too. Would you want anything more than that?

I didn't put drums over the top because the drums from the original song rocked so hard.

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that was crap..

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I'm dead and I write..

What the fuck does that make me?

^^^poetic zombies are the coolest!!!

red bull in: "write of the living thread".


s.v.

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Originally Posted by Nick Fletcher. I don't drive an Eclipse, they're chickmobiles.

QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection???
ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE



"I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown




R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love.