Yung, look up some verses..an try to model your verse differently..looks like your writin down a freestyle or some shit.

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Fear

I am and I wasn't dissin you I was saying that he was hiding behind you and I broke down his name....

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quicky verse thats life kid

~Welcome to

The MEDIkated Lyfe..........~

L.p Smashed This Dude Ez!! Harder Punches More Creative Just All Around Murder Sceen...

Little Pussy Mothafuckaz Never Do Come Through Elevated
LOL
ok so now i understand your name..1
you got so much fear you layed here
hoping lay fear would protect your fame...2
NO
king me while i check mate
then beat your chess til i get board like checkers........3
how can he be better than me when off the record
this is his record(0-0)....4
NICE
he thought he could fuck with the medikated8
my level so high my skills get escalated9
but we already know
(Little Pussy Mothafuckaz Never Do Come Through Eleveted)
LOL

vs

your worst than I expected..no wonder ur cursed n neglected
u couldn't electrify a crowd if The Rock gave u a surge of protection
OK
^^^and that words of perfection, opposite of what you record reflects
responses to your C.S. tryouts sums up your status ...rejected
NO
so get Plexed or flipped..on your backs where you landed
only reason I'm keying sit down,,cuz ur verse cant stand it
PLAYED BUT OK
n I may sign out today..this novice just aint seeing me
I would take this battle seriously, but its to easy to beat easy
OKISH
n I'm tired as shit, but I'll dismantle you mouth first
then come accross open handedly, n slap together some words
OKISH

VOTE/LP...
THE OTHER CAT WAS FUNNY THO(DEF POTENTIAL)...SHIT JUST DIDNT HIT HARD ENOUGH

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Fear