really passionate bud, i liked it. very involving vocab, which really took ahold of me as i was reading, and made it all the more enjoyable. what else can i say really, it all flowed together, it was creative, imaginitive, great emotion... keep writing dude

No knife or gun could stop me when these jaws tell tales,
Because violence isn't inspiration. It's "If all else fails."
It's a madman's last resort when his sentences aren't true,
But if violence is your answer, how intelligent are you?

wicked stuff.

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The Establishment
I am the Batman.