This piece is the cliche for the phrase "short yet sweet". Well done...Your flow was created beautifully..with Great multie rhyming with the end/beginning of lines...followed by exceptional vocab..pretty elegant piece...you got your point across greatley fam....though i feel imagery was not really apparent in the verse...though it seems it was more an emotional piece seeing how u were trying to some what make a statement more than make us invision a story. 7/10 man...rtf to please

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