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Old 07-27-08, 05:49 PM   #1
Keith Moon
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Championship Round

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Well haven't we all coasted to a championship round?
Kirk vs. Nostradamus vs. Me is finna be sick though..
good luck gentlemen.. battle up monday.. and I'll have someone else drop the topic for fairness sake
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Old 07-27-08, 07:11 PM   #2
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Foooor shooooo'.
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Old 07-29-08, 09:07 PM   #3
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sorry i no-showed....
...i got court so i have to worry bout that first
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Old 08-01-08, 08:05 PM   #4
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My mind's eye extends its hand and captures the shards of the falling glass
collects and recreates the vivid vision, of my masterpiece at last
Shattered seams holding this perfect harmony together, this ultimate artpiece
I shall create it, before it slips away as a fox under the darkness of night's crease
My paint merely a dirty window, a mere cameo of the uncomprehensible reality
of this art I seek to create, my Frankenstein that has battered me
None can see that humanity is art at its most pure and pristine example
an indetermindible amount of beauty, not understood but merely sampled
A visage often dilluded and destroyed, impossible to truly capture..
..well until I bestow the world with a glory and awe akin to God's rapture
No one can understand the great journey I undertake, no one at all
MY wife craves my presence in our bed, yet my eyelids simply can not fall
My daughter wants me to play games with her but how could that be?
Does she not understand the gracious gift I will grant to humanity
Their eyes will open and minds will no longer doubt the purpose of life
Wards will halt, swords will drop, bitter enemies will be husband and wife
I can change it all if I only could express these ideas physically
Translate my words to the common language without loosing the true meaning
I must! This is God's work... no... no my Work must be God
Captured by me, a mere mortal will reveal his omnipotency to all!
Yet, they still call, Can't they understand anything beyond their trifles?
I pace back and forth, each word a sharp stab from the bayonet of their rifle
I can't get their words out of my head, "come to dinner", clouding my thoughts
I close the door in their faces, let them keep that food for though?
Work meticulousy, each stroke slowl, deliberate, measured and calculated
God's essence pours out my soul through my finger tips unto the painting
My joy is hardly concealable, muscles push my lips to my cheeks
could it be after a year of frustration, my work may be complete?
No its not finished, somethings missing, how can this fall apart?
It put me through a year of hell, now I put my foot through my art
I can hear them goading and laughing, their pleasure at my dismay
poking and proding me for my failures, claiming i've lost my way
"I should have listened" I've heard it and doubtless I will again
From my wife and my childrem, my works scared off any friends
Their gloating eyes are visible to me, My fitst clench in a ball
As i destroy my work in a rage, I see how it can be complete afterall

The Work is complete

A faint mutter, inaudible, it provides the perfect ambience
swen shut, so his humanity can't escape, his soul cant be lost
the blood, a perfect crimson paint, dried with an unusual texture
DOubtless the professors will readily invite me to deliver a sterling lecture
No, rather than kill, he's my prize, the crucifix to my wall
Hanging by a nail and his hands, his humanity on display to all
I'll keep him alive, he needs to, mankind will worship at its feet
It took the son of man for my masterpiece to finally be complete
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Old 08-02-08, 02:48 AM   #5
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kirk no shows
wtf?
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Old 08-03-08, 11:59 AM   #6
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Well this tournament blew.
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Old 08-03-08, 12:28 PM   #7
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Yeah. My bad. I work for a living.
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Old 08-03-08, 10:02 PM   #8
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Kirk represents The Establishment, so he automatically wins.

Sorry Keith.
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Old 08-03-08, 10:41 PM   #9
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It blew because I didn't participate.
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