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12-21-08, 11:46 AM | #1 | |||||
Houdini
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For my haters " MAINLY CJ" fuckin Douchebag
IP: 00FF F792
These kids dads shoulda flushed the rubbers on these kids
Lookin 4 the skyscraper...They just discovered MY penis Oooh its Cj, Ima kill you bitch, I'd rip ya cock off but, No hoe would have ya kids You and your styles USELESS, Dont think ur duckin me...IM LOOKIN 4 U BITCH Wanna crack on the notepad and pen Line? Ima make ur mom blow me 2 her head shine.... Wait you look like me son..You just might be... Gettin ya self killed, and floatin like a fish in the sea You cant fux wit me, You aint on my level hoe Kid beatin me isnt..and option..its your death note Ima slit you, noone knows how ur mom birthed you Or why? Ima kill you and convince em its Suicide too. How many times I have to shun these little bitches? Before some 1 realizes, Im notta doctor, But still produce stitches I had 2 bring this cuz nigga Just dickrode Mathers Yall ask me a question... Ima bat these bitches wit Swollen Answers People try 2get in my head, I already have that issue Ima KILL YOU, Dead. Noone needs the tissues Bury your body your not Unique Thats why your whackass gets buried 12 feet ("not 6ft") You really have no rhymes, So I battled you wit sense Actually I wrote it fast cuz hoe YOU AINT BEATIN THIS Ha Ha 2 Cj, Trying 2 cockride Mathers sore Wanna know what whore?, I just killed u in a dis. JUST SETTLED THE SCORE
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12-21-08, 11:52 AM | #2 | |||||
Houdini
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IP: 00FF F792
2 links
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=248030 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=247902
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01-07-09, 02:43 AM | #3 | |||||||
New to RV
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IP: EEE6 80E9
Damn...even the Open Mic section is dead..
All right, Some rhymes were forced here. Like the unique/12 feet part and the swollen answers/rode Mathers. Also, ease up on the whole sex with people's mother thing. I'd rate this verse a 6.5/10...more originality is needed. My main advice, work on originality and subject matter first, and then the multis second. |
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01-28-09, 10:27 PM | #4 | ||||
Maggot
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IP: 864F 9880
Punches punches punches its all i bring to your fights
left hook right hook im never tired ill keep coming all night wins wins wins about to tell im not the losing type cuz your rhymes are like bringing fists to a gun fight RV wont favor to you,these niggas wont cater to you, you can get the barrell in your mouth in favor of you put five in your tater for you,the rap game is a zoo but its not for you,you can get ya face and ya chest snuffed my rounds shake the ground like and earth quake does plus im sick but dont be pissed first ill kill you lyrically then come at you with closed fists its not anything to shoot you ill shoot you like a basket recieves just believe i shine to bright im over looked cant be seen im clean cut keep talking slick ill turn dirty you get a clip in the gut cuz you aint even worth a fight your whole life is a joke 32 years old live at your moms home ,broke and in the last battle you said you came well equipped...one question well equiped with what a saddle?i can picture your faggot ass riding dick as your teeth start to raddle. oh and to be honest are a faggot cuz you sure do act like one.talking about riding dick and cocks all the time.
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Rip H.P. and A.M.H. Rep The Pep Rap clicks online? Wackkk. -The B.E.S.T. Crew? haha ya'll niggas on some eli porter shit. Last edited by Its CJ : 01-31-09 at 02:21 AM. |
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