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02-20-09, 09:30 PM | #31 | ||||||||
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02-21-09, 06:11 AM | #32 | |||
Skadoosh!
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Words is full of gimmiks, enough of the talk bro i think we've all had it
Cuz only people praisin Words of God is Alcholic's and drug Addicts This wasn't good at all. If I'm being brutally honest I'd have to say it reads simple and there is no harshness about it. It touches on the borderline between a statement and a punch. Also, I felt it was a little predictable. You didn't really flip it that well. All that, combined with the fact that I've seen the nameflip on him before just made this feel really weak. his crews full of fags.. no pussy for miles so I gaurantee that u'll die.. besides, coke would rather chase Adam n Jon then push Suicide. eh, this wasn't great at all. The fucking line structure was fucking strange to. Overall, I couldn't really find any positives about this punch because it just lacked entirely in execution. It attempts a personal, but you really did nothing with the concept and there was potential here for a harsh hit. N' no one takes u for real this comic act'll get fuckin pulverized coz I move Coke too.. Hell, every day I put jokes aside. This felt a tad predictable. The wording was direct at least, but simplistic. A little creative spark would've been nice here and it could've turned an ok punch into a nice one. Overall, the toss jokes aside is an old concept and it's been flipped better. Also, when its been flipped the way you flipped it.. I've seen it done with better wording and execution. yep, this dude's from 04, and i think we can till you aint battle in a while Cuz Words your style is completely fucked like virgins doing doggy style This was fucking garbage, plain and simple. The whole concept of saying something and then referencing a metaphor with "LIKE (then finish the punch)" is fucking old. I've seen some fly recently, only down to some solid wording though. The wording here was weak, it read plain and simple and the severe lack of creativity just took everything away from this punch. There was really nothing good about it at all. Honestly, this battle was weak. Wordz can drop WAAAAYYYYY better and Coke can even drop better than this. I'll honestly say, at the current moment in time Wordz is a better battler than Coke, he is more polished based on everything I've seen from both of them. Since joining this league though, he dropped no show ass and now some weak ass shit. I don't think he is taking this seriously because he really is dropping garbage. Coke pulled the win out here with the first punch. This battle was fucking pants though. VOTE: COKE DEALER |
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02-21-09, 06:22 AM | #33 | ||||||||
Pushin it....
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dope vote Solo
nice, explained, and.... wait...where's the sway?
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02-21-09, 07:00 PM | #34 | ||||||
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yep, this dude's from 04, and i think we can till you aint battle in a while
Cuz Words your style is completely fucked like virgins doing doggy style This was not creative enough. Too played to use and too simplistic... Words is full of gimmiks, enough of the talk bro i think we've all had it Cuz only people praisin Words of God is Alcholic's and drug Addicts This was easily the best bar of the battle. The 2nd line was fire and really connect well against Words Ah God. Stong hit. his crews full of fags.. no pussy for miles so I gaurantee that u'll die.. besides, coke would rather chase Adam n Jon then push Suicide. The content of this was not delivered well. should have been worded better. N' no one takes u for real this comic act'll get fuckin pulverized coz I move Coke too.. Hell, every day I put jokes aside. This was okay. I think this punch was way better than the above punch you used. ********************************** Vote - Coke Dealer, because of the nameplay word flip that hit harder
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02-23-09, 02:59 PM | #35 | ||||
What' it do?
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coke edges it... 5-1
wordzz 1-1
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