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Let ME fiiiinnd ooout

It's overious that this kid goes unnoticed like hidden dirt under the dresser
Either your weak as fuck or you hold back on punches more than pro wrestlers

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Every thread you posts is about "PORN" you must love to see a guys nuts
But I guess it's safe to say that almost everything in your posts "SUCKS"

For real doggy, no more porn threads. :-P

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uhhhh....kinda weak

Murdah-i couldnt really follow yours cause of the spacing and the capital letters and shit and its also Batteries...at least i think

lyricalflowz-hold back on punches than pro wrestlers..lol

vote-flowz solid 2 punches

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Although these words, DIG, DEEP
They offer no relief...

No seriously my shit was edit by civl and it wasn't like that when I droped it seriously this is fucked up....

And fuck spelling did u get what the punch was?

Fucking morons how u trying to point out a fucking mis spell word like that's what cost me the battle fucking dush bag swear ya niggas is nut huggers

wow......

...and I got it, still sucked.

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Although these words, DIG, DEEP
They offer no relief...

And a porn punch which wasn't even a punch was SOILD???

Get the fuck outta here I'm tierd of talking to stupid mother fuckers like u,

Want money? Dear To Sue Me?, trust imma Beast With The Scripts cuz im 'Incresing Ya Flips, yea im'a SCARY NEWBIE

Who isnt 'Fixing To Fight Fair' cuz MurDah 'Mixed in hes Night-Mare' like Jason SCARY MOVIES
your lines are like bars themselves.....really stretched punch was pretty weak to


Stop 'Fronting About Ya Hype' cuz your 'Runing Outta Life' like DEAD BATTIERS!!

Trust i make Bread Vanish, Ease, so if ya 'Cruising Wait' cuz i'll have ya 'Losing Weight' like droping DEAD CALORIES
again witht he structure....and again a weak punch




other dudes was weak also but he atleast had flow and structure, even though you could cut your lines down a bit they would be better....
but vote lyrical

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It's ok to make money, Legit or illegal...
But it's treason when you turn your back on your people.

It's overious that this kid goes unnoticed like hidden dirt under the dresser
Either your weak as fuck or you hold back on punches more than pro wrestlers
cool decent, i dont see anything wrong with this.

Want money? Dear To Sue Me?, trust imma Beast With The Scripts cuz im 'Incresing Ya Flips, yea im'a SCARY NEWBIE

Who isnt 'Fixing To Fight Fair' cuz MurDah 'Mixed in hes Night-Mare' like Jason SCARY MOVIES



Stop 'Fronting About Ya Hype' cuz your 'Runing Outta Life' like DEAD BATTIERS!!

Trust i make Bread Vanish, Ease, so if ya 'Cruising Wait' cuz i'll have ya 'Losing Weight' like droping DEAD CALORIES!!
eh, first line was weak, the second was weak too but had a lot more potential then the first and you coulda came wit better wording and a better structure. I think you need to focus on that, make sure your punches hit hard, you got potential. And in a 2 bar battle, dont sacrafice a line, come hard everytime.


Every thread you posts is about "PORN" you must love to see a guys nuts
But I guess it's safe to say that almost everything in your posts "SUCKS
ehh basic, really basic

Vote: Lyrical

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It's overious that this kid goes unnoticed like hidden dirt under the dresser
Either your weak as fuck or you hold back on punches more than pro wrestlers
^^pretty simple^^
Every thread you posts is about "PORN" you must love to see a guys nuts
But I guess it's safe to say that almost everything in your posts "SUCKS"
^^wasn't feeling^^

vs

Want money? Dear To Sue Me?, trust imma Beast With The Scripts cuz im 'Incresing Ya Flips, yea im'a SCARY NEWBIE
Who isnt 'Fixing To Fight Fair' cuz MurDah 'Mixed in hes Night-Mare' like Jason SCARY MOVIES
^^liked the multis, wasn't feeling the punch^^
Stop 'Fronting About Ya Hype' cuz your 'Runing Outta Life' like DEAD BATTIERS!!
Trust i make Bread Vanish, Ease, so if ya 'Cruising Wait' cuz i'll have ya 'Losing Weight' like droping DEAD CALORIES!!
^^again wasn't effective^^

I'm not gunna get on murda about the structure, but more on the directness of your punches, murda shows potential, especially with rhymeschemes. need to trim them bars a little, and throw harder hitting connections.

v/Lyrical

Good looks on the honest vote ya broke down good win lyrical...props

Vote: Lyrical

murdah sucks ass

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^^^^… yeah, that was a good vote. i agree, i should step it up instead of swaying votes.