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03-04-09, 05:36 PM | #1 | ||||
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Week 6: lyricalflows 0-0 .vs Murdah 0-0
IP: 91BA 0020
Monday Morning: Battles are set up Wednesday: lyricalflows 1 bar Thursday: Murdha 2 bars Friday: lyricalflows 1 bar Sunday: Battles Night Close Feeding is allowed and will be optional
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03-04-09, 11:01 PM | #2 | |||
New Jack
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It's overious that this kid goes unnoticed like hidden dirt under the dresser
Either your weak as fuck or you hold back on punches more than pro wrestlers
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03-05-09, 02:19 PM | #3 | ||||||
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Want money? Dear To Sue Me?, trust imma Beast With The Scripts cuz im 'Incresing Ya Flips, yea im'a SCARY NEWBIE
Who isnt 'Fixing To Fight Fair' cuz MurDah 'Mixed in hes Night-Mare' like Jason SCARY MOVIES Stop 'Fronting About Ya Hype' cuz your 'Runing Outta Life' like DEAD BATTIERS!! Trust i make Bread Vanish, Ease, so if ya 'Cruising Wait' cuz i'll have ya 'Losing Weight' like droping DEAD CALORIES!! Last edited by Civil. : 03-05-09 at 02:23 PM. |
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03-05-09, 08:53 PM | #4 | |||
New Jack
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IP: 7F78 251B
Every thread you posts is about "PORN" you must love to see a guys nuts
But I guess it's safe to say that almost everything in your posts "SUCKS" For real doggy, no more porn threads. :-P
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03-05-09, 08:58 PM | #5 | |||||
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uhhhh....kinda weak
Murdah-i couldnt really follow yours cause of the spacing and the capital letters and shit and its also Batteries...at least i think lyricalflowz-hold back on punches than pro wrestlers..lol vote-flowz solid 2 punches
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03-05-09, 09:10 PM | #6 | ||||||
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No seriously my shit was edit by civl and it wasn't like that when I droped it seriously this is fucked up....
And fuck spelling did u get what the punch was? Fucking morons how u trying to point out a fucking mis spell word like that's what cost me the battle fucking dush bag swear ya niggas is nut huggers |
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03-05-09, 09:19 PM | #7 | |||||
Maggot
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IP: 1356 B750
wow......
...and I got it, still sucked.
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03-05-09, 09:24 PM | #8 | ||||||
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And a porn punch which wasn't even a punch was SOILD???
Get the fuck outta here I'm tierd of talking to stupid mother fuckers like u, |
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03-05-09, 10:27 PM | #9 | |||||||
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Want money? Dear To Sue Me?, trust imma Beast With The Scripts cuz im 'Incresing Ya Flips, yea im'a SCARY NEWBIE
Who isnt 'Fixing To Fight Fair' cuz MurDah 'Mixed in hes Night-Mare' like Jason SCARY MOVIES your lines are like bars themselves.....really stretched punch was pretty weak to Stop 'Fronting About Ya Hype' cuz your 'Runing Outta Life' like DEAD BATTIERS!! Trust i make Bread Vanish, Ease, so if ya 'Cruising Wait' cuz i'll have ya 'Losing Weight' like droping DEAD CALORIES again witht he structure....and again a weak punch other dudes was weak also but he atleast had flow and structure, even though you could cut your lines down a bit they would be better.... but vote lyrical
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03-05-09, 10:31 PM | #10 | |||||||
Light Weight
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It's overious that this kid goes unnoticed like hidden dirt under the dresser
Either your weak as fuck or you hold back on punches more than pro wrestlers cool decent, i dont see anything wrong with this. Want money? Dear To Sue Me?, trust imma Beast With The Scripts cuz im 'Incresing Ya Flips, yea im'a SCARY NEWBIE Who isnt 'Fixing To Fight Fair' cuz MurDah 'Mixed in hes Night-Mare' like Jason SCARY MOVIES Stop 'Fronting About Ya Hype' cuz your 'Runing Outta Life' like DEAD BATTIERS!! Trust i make Bread Vanish, Ease, so if ya 'Cruising Wait' cuz i'll have ya 'Losing Weight' like droping DEAD CALORIES!! eh, first line was weak, the second was weak too but had a lot more potential then the first and you coulda came wit better wording and a better structure. I think you need to focus on that, make sure your punches hit hard, you got potential. And in a 2 bar battle, dont sacrafice a line, come hard everytime. Every thread you posts is about "PORN" you must love to see a guys nuts But I guess it's safe to say that almost everything in your posts "SUCKS ehh basic, really basic Vote: Lyrical
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03-05-09, 10:35 PM | #11 | |||||||
text.even geico can do it
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It's overious that this kid goes unnoticed like hidden dirt under the dresser
Either your weak as fuck or you hold back on punches more than pro wrestlers ^^pretty simple^^ Every thread you posts is about "PORN" you must love to see a guys nuts But I guess it's safe to say that almost everything in your posts "SUCKS" ^^wasn't feeling^^ vs Want money? Dear To Sue Me?, trust imma Beast With The Scripts cuz im 'Incresing Ya Flips, yea im'a SCARY NEWBIE Who isnt 'Fixing To Fight Fair' cuz MurDah 'Mixed in hes Night-Mare' like Jason SCARY MOVIES ^^liked the multis, wasn't feeling the punch^^ Stop 'Fronting About Ya Hype' cuz your 'Runing Outta Life' like DEAD BATTIERS!! Trust i make Bread Vanish, Ease, so if ya 'Cruising Wait' cuz i'll have ya 'Losing Weight' like droping DEAD CALORIES!! ^^again wasn't effective^^ I'm not gunna get on murda about the structure, but more on the directness of your punches, murda shows potential, especially with rhymeschemes. need to trim them bars a little, and throw harder hitting connections. v/Lyrical |
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03-05-09, 11:21 PM | #12 | ||||||
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Good looks on the honest vote ya broke down good win lyrical...props
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03-05-09, 11:42 PM | #13 | ||||||||
Pushin it....
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Vote: Lyrical
murdah sucks ass
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03-05-09, 11:59 PM | #14 | ||||||
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^^^^… yeah, that was a good vote. i agree, i should step it up instead of swaying votes.
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03-06-09, 07:21 PM | #15 | |||||||||
Pushin it....
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*high five *
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