MOnkey, your verse was cool I got your message but it wasn't as deep as I was hoping, and your structure and use of slang really took away from it in my opinion, I think with some rewording it could have been a lot better.

Bob, I was diggin this, vocab was cool wich made it read better, your message was nice and the way you delivered it wasw too. A few spots were a little weak and forced but mostly it was really well done..


vote bob

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