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Old 03-09-09, 08:43 AM   #1
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Gimmick Battle: Mimesis 0-1 .vs Ryan Hughes 0-1 -needs feed-

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Old 03-09-09, 04:19 PM   #2
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Old 03-10-09, 08:39 PM   #3
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I'm doing a regular battle.
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Old 03-12-09, 10:49 PM   #4
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Ryan Hughes. Trey Methodz.

I remember you, dog.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225601

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Trey Methodz is banned.


Kempo gave this jerk the boot, his custom title shows he's a nerd, it's true
You ain't just a man of steel cause you got guns -- it's how you get your verses too
Round 3 in KORV, the LBL -- I remember 'em, and you better believe that
There hasn't been 1 tournament or league you've EVER done better than me at
It's the rematch. . I beat you already, so this is twice you've been slammed
You ain't breaking down my verse unless Final asks for help with writing the mags
Cause I'm the type who'll smash ya dome, faggot I got a hold on this board
I'll make your Body Lie for so long Dicaprio will lose his starring role to your corpse
Best believe we all think you're a faggot too, and I don't slow for nothin'
Your sexuality's so suspect the FBI had to put you at the top of the most wanted
Your hopes? Fuck 'em -- I'm a beast, the whole site knows this faggot's a waste
My punches'll make your spine so crooked you'd think the voting here is actually straight
I believe if you try you could be decent -- that's why I'ma keep you alive
You'll be in the jump so long you shouldn't have a problem with reaching the sky

'Chea! It's Mimesis -- and I'm a beast with the rhymes!
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Old 03-13-09, 10:56 AM   #5
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Well shit, can I at least get some feedback?
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Old 03-13-09, 11:09 AM   #6
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Kempo gave this jerk the boot, his custom title shows he's a nerd, it's true
You ain't just a man of steel cause you got guns -- it's how you get your verses too
cool concept, wording was good enough but cud've been improved just to make it a little more hard-hitting. basically, it shows that you still shaking the rust off.

Round 3 in KORV, the LBL -- I remember 'em, and you better believe that
There hasn't been 1 tournament or league you've EVER done better than me at
lol, wording was nice.. swag was nice to

It's the rematch. . I beat you already, so this is twice you've been slammed
You ain't breaking down my verse unless Final asks for help with writing the mags
a year or so ago this would've been nice. you've been away too long though so you prolly don't realise that this shit is played now. although, on RV its prolly still considered to be a monster punch.


Cause I'm the type who'll smash ya dome, faggot I got a hold on this board
I'll make your Body Lie for so long Dicaprio will lose his starring role to your corpse
nice reference, wording could be worked a little better.. overall the punch was solid enough but not really a banger.

Best believe we all think you're a faggot too, and I don't slow for nothin'
Your sexuality's so suspect the FBI had to put you at the top of the most wanted
same as the mag shit, its played now. but on this site, who knows?

Your hopes? Fuck 'em -- I'm a beast, the whole site knows this faggot's a waste
My punches'll make your spine so crooked you'd think the voting here is actually straight
rofl. a flip on some shit that's been said many times.. but it still works because it is still SO RELEVANT! the truth of this is what makes it sound more harsh than it actually is. you took a regular statement and made it sound vicious.

I believe if you try you could be decent -- that's why I'ma keep you alive
You'll be in the jump so long you shouldn't have a problem with reaching the sky
ehh, I get the wordplay in this.. that is ok, but really I don't like the concept in general and the wording just makes it sound readable, but lacking anything that really makes it hit home.


An up and down verse, a couple of played spots that your time off has left you guilty of. overall there were some glimpses of the old Mimesis beastly mojo, but still the rust is showing a small bit. I'm pretty sure that a battle or two more and you'll be back into full swing on this shit.
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Old 03-13-09, 04:10 PM   #7
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Thanks for the feedback man. Good shit.
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Old 03-13-09, 08:13 PM   #8
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Kempo gave this jerk the boot, his custom title shows he's a nerd, it's true
You ain't just a man of steel cause you got guns -- it's how you get your verses too
Concept was there, but i felt this was worded badly. Just needed a bit of a touch up. ok though
Round 3 in KORV, the LBL -- I remember 'em, and you better believe that
There hasn't been 1 tournament or league you've EVER done better than me at
Lol, Cool. niiiicely worded.
It's the rematch. . I beat you already, so this is twice you've been slammed
You ain't breaking down my verse unless Final asks for help with writing the mags
again, very good wording. not real harsh, but effective
Cause I'm the type who'll smash ya dome, faggot I got a hold on this board
I'll make your Body Lie for so long Dicaprio will lose his starring role to your corpse
this was ok
Best believe we all think you're a faggot too, and I don't slow for nothin'
Your sexuality's so suspect the FBI had to put you at the top of the most wanted
no no no
Your hopes? Fuck 'em -- I'm a beast, the whole site knows this faggot's a waste
My punches'll make your spine so crooked you'd think the voting here is actually straight
i liked this. cool
I believe if you try you could be decent -- that's why I'ma keep you alive
You'll be in the jump so long you shouldn't have a problem with reaching the sky
no no no
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Old 03-13-09, 09:36 PM   #9
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Kempo gave this jerk the boot, his custom title shows he's a nerd, it's true
You ain't just a man of steel cause you got guns -- it's how you get your verses too

this was an okayish opener


Round 3 in KORV, the LBL -- I remember 'em, and you better believe that
There hasn't been 1 tournament or league you've EVER done better than me at

LOL, this was cool


It's the rematch. . I beat you already, so this is twice you've been slammed
You ain't breaking down my verse unless Final asks for help with writing the mags


Good wordplay, another good personal hit

Cause I'm the type who'll smash ya dome, faggot I got a hold on this board
I'll make your Body Lie for so long Dicaprio will lose his starring role to your corpse

LMFAO, this was one of the strongest punches I have seen in the league. Dam,very hard hit here


Best believe we all think you're a faggot too, and I don't slow for nothin'
Your sexuality's so suspect the FBI had to put you at the top of the most wanted

LOL, good hit here

Your hopes? Fuck 'em -- I'm a beast, the whole site knows this faggot's a waste
My punches'll make your spine so crooked you'd think the voting here is actually straight

LOL, man your good


I believe if you try you could be decent -- that's why I'ma keep you alive
You'll be in the jump so long you shouldn't have a problem with reaching the sky


LOL, good ender


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Reading that verse was like reading one the best this year. Full of funny disses. Good level of skill displaced in your verse
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Old 03-13-09, 10:28 PM   #10
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Omg i'm in your verse.<3
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Old 03-14-09, 12:17 AM   #11
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<3 you. (no homo like )
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Old 03-14-09, 12:54 AM   #12
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8/10 good punches, decent creativity even thou its cool with u to toss onld played punches but it aint for me but whatever u still had a decent verse i like and thought was pretty good...
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Old 03-14-09, 04:52 AM   #13
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idk if you'll count this but w/e

i get bitches and money, this nigga can't even ball right
if this verse is wack, i let ur sister write it cuz i was too tired from fucking her all night
you should be getting high an drunk, forget about shit thats due online
arizona state is the 3rd biggest party school, an you still had your verse in on time
your a nobody man, in school or in the thug seen
last time you said something breaking,
....your underwear snaped while yehlling for the dean
i heard you aint oringinal, changing the kings hits to see hope shine
fo'real fucker i'd perdict him to win too, since you always flip dope lines
u fucking biter ass nigga, i heard all your shit an yah dudes lame
you racked up so many losses... i got a restraing order on pool games
i got a mean right hook, that i send to fag kids
nigga i'll give you strathan shots till your teeth is as wide as his
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Old 03-14-09, 05:02 AM   #14
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you rack up lose/ restraining order line was dope but noting else aside from that the arizon school party was ok but need it much more for a come back word.....

i would vote mem even if u drop on time....
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Old 03-16-09, 10:10 AM   #15
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Mim wins 1-1. And is moved back to the main arena

ryan loses recieving his second loss. And is eliminated

You Are the weakest link.

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