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03-09-09, 08:43 AM | #1 | ||||
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Gimmick Battle: Mimesis 0-1 .vs Ryan Hughes 0-1 -needs feed-
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03-09-09, 04:19 PM | #2 | |||||||
the real man of steel
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in this........
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03-10-09, 08:39 PM | #3 | ||||
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I'm doing a regular battle.
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03-12-09, 10:49 PM | #4 | |||||
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Ryan Hughes. Trey Methodz.
I remember you, dog. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225601 Quote:
Kempo gave this jerk the boot, his custom title shows he's a nerd, it's true You ain't just a man of steel cause you got guns -- it's how you get your verses too Round 3 in KORV, the LBL -- I remember 'em, and you better believe that There hasn't been 1 tournament or league you've EVER done better than me at It's the rematch. . I beat you already, so this is twice you've been slammed You ain't breaking down my verse unless Final asks for help with writing the mags Cause I'm the type who'll smash ya dome, faggot I got a hold on this board I'll make your Body Lie for so long Dicaprio will lose his starring role to your corpse Best believe we all think you're a faggot too, and I don't slow for nothin' Your sexuality's so suspect the FBI had to put you at the top of the most wanted Your hopes? Fuck 'em -- I'm a beast, the whole site knows this faggot's a waste My punches'll make your spine so crooked you'd think the voting here is actually straight I believe if you try you could be decent -- that's why I'ma keep you alive You'll be in the jump so long you shouldn't have a problem with reaching the sky 'Chea! It's Mimesis -- and I'm a beast with the rhymes! |
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03-13-09, 10:56 AM | #5 | ||||
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Well shit, can I at least get some feedback?
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03-13-09, 11:09 AM | #6 | |||
Skadoosh!
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Kempo gave this jerk the boot, his custom title shows he's a nerd, it's true
You ain't just a man of steel cause you got guns -- it's how you get your verses too cool concept, wording was good enough but cud've been improved just to make it a little more hard-hitting. basically, it shows that you still shaking the rust off. Round 3 in KORV, the LBL -- I remember 'em, and you better believe that There hasn't been 1 tournament or league you've EVER done better than me at lol, wording was nice.. swag was nice to It's the rematch. . I beat you already, so this is twice you've been slammed You ain't breaking down my verse unless Final asks for help with writing the mags a year or so ago this would've been nice. you've been away too long though so you prolly don't realise that this shit is played now. although, on RV its prolly still considered to be a monster punch. Cause I'm the type who'll smash ya dome, faggot I got a hold on this board I'll make your Body Lie for so long Dicaprio will lose his starring role to your corpse nice reference, wording could be worked a little better.. overall the punch was solid enough but not really a banger. Best believe we all think you're a faggot too, and I don't slow for nothin' Your sexuality's so suspect the FBI had to put you at the top of the most wanted same as the mag shit, its played now. but on this site, who knows? Your hopes? Fuck 'em -- I'm a beast, the whole site knows this faggot's a waste My punches'll make your spine so crooked you'd think the voting here is actually straight rofl. a flip on some shit that's been said many times.. but it still works because it is still SO RELEVANT! the truth of this is what makes it sound more harsh than it actually is. you took a regular statement and made it sound vicious. I believe if you try you could be decent -- that's why I'ma keep you alive You'll be in the jump so long you shouldn't have a problem with reaching the sky ehh, I get the wordplay in this.. that is ok, but really I don't like the concept in general and the wording just makes it sound readable, but lacking anything that really makes it hit home. An up and down verse, a couple of played spots that your time off has left you guilty of. overall there were some glimpses of the old Mimesis beastly mojo, but still the rust is showing a small bit. I'm pretty sure that a battle or two more and you'll be back into full swing on this shit. |
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03-13-09, 04:10 PM | #7 | ||||
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Thanks for the feedback man. Good shit.
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03-13-09, 08:13 PM | #8 | ||||
What' it do?
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Kempo gave this jerk the boot, his custom title shows he's a nerd, it's true
You ain't just a man of steel cause you got guns -- it's how you get your verses too Concept was there, but i felt this was worded badly. Just needed a bit of a touch up. ok though Round 3 in KORV, the LBL -- I remember 'em, and you better believe that There hasn't been 1 tournament or league you've EVER done better than me at Lol, Cool. niiiicely worded. It's the rematch. . I beat you already, so this is twice you've been slammed You ain't breaking down my verse unless Final asks for help with writing the mags again, very good wording. not real harsh, but effective Cause I'm the type who'll smash ya dome, faggot I got a hold on this board I'll make your Body Lie for so long Dicaprio will lose his starring role to your corpse this was ok Best believe we all think you're a faggot too, and I don't slow for nothin' Your sexuality's so suspect the FBI had to put you at the top of the most wanted no no no Your hopes? Fuck 'em -- I'm a beast, the whole site knows this faggot's a waste My punches'll make your spine so crooked you'd think the voting here is actually straight i liked this. cool I believe if you try you could be decent -- that's why I'ma keep you alive You'll be in the jump so long you shouldn't have a problem with reaching the sky no no no
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03-13-09, 09:36 PM | #9 | ||||||
New Jack
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Kempo gave this jerk the boot, his custom title shows he's a nerd, it's true
You ain't just a man of steel cause you got guns -- it's how you get your verses too this was an okayish opener Round 3 in KORV, the LBL -- I remember 'em, and you better believe that There hasn't been 1 tournament or league you've EVER done better than me at LOL, this was cool It's the rematch. . I beat you already, so this is twice you've been slammed You ain't breaking down my verse unless Final asks for help with writing the mags Good wordplay, another good personal hit Cause I'm the type who'll smash ya dome, faggot I got a hold on this board I'll make your Body Lie for so long Dicaprio will lose his starring role to your corpse LMFAO, this was one of the strongest punches I have seen in the league. Dam,very hard hit here Best believe we all think you're a faggot too, and I don't slow for nothin' Your sexuality's so suspect the FBI had to put you at the top of the most wanted LOL, good hit here Your hopes? Fuck 'em -- I'm a beast, the whole site knows this faggot's a waste My punches'll make your spine so crooked you'd think the voting here is actually straight LOL, man your good I believe if you try you could be decent -- that's why I'ma keep you alive You'll be in the jump so long you shouldn't have a problem with reaching the sky LOL, good ender -------------------------- Reading that verse was like reading one the best this year. Full of funny disses. Good level of skill displaced in your verse
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03-13-09, 10:28 PM | #10 | |||
Light Weight
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Omg i'm in your verse.<3
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03-14-09, 12:17 AM | #11 | ||||
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<3 you. (no homo like )
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03-14-09, 12:54 AM | #12 | ||||||
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8/10 good punches, decent creativity even thou its cool with u to toss onld played punches but it aint for me but whatever u still had a decent verse i like and thought was pretty good...
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03-14-09, 04:52 AM | #13 | |||||||
the real man of steel
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idk if you'll count this but w/e
i get bitches and money, this nigga can't even ball right if this verse is wack, i let ur sister write it cuz i was too tired from fucking her all night you should be getting high an drunk, forget about shit thats due online arizona state is the 3rd biggest party school, an you still had your verse in on time your a nobody man, in school or in the thug seen last time you said something breaking, ....your underwear snaped while yehlling for the dean i heard you aint oringinal, changing the kings hits to see hope shine fo'real fucker i'd perdict him to win too, since you always flip dope lines u fucking biter ass nigga, i heard all your shit an yah dudes lame you racked up so many losses... i got a restraing order on pool games i got a mean right hook, that i send to fag kids nigga i'll give you strathan shots till your teeth is as wide as his
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03-14-09, 05:02 AM | #14 | ||||||
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you rack up lose/ restraining order line was dope but noting else aside from that the arizon school party was ok but need it much more for a come back word.....
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03-16-09, 10:10 AM | #15 | ||||
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Mim wins 1-1. And is moved back to the main arena
ryan loses recieving his second loss. And is eliminated You Are the weakest link. Goodbye!
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