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Old 02-25-09, 03:45 PM   #1
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When I looked at you was I like dang I want her, or did I attempt to get a boner? Hell nah, bimbo not neither one of those, thought you different but you're just another one of those stuck up women that life chose to piss me off, and get my anger exposed. Well guess what you succedded, this portion of my life is constantly being repeated. I had enough I get it already, don't care for having kids, I aint trying to get married. If your friend get involved he'll get in the balls, then start slamming his head into a wall post, and won't stop til his blood's the reason that my hands are soaked.
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Old 03-05-09, 02:49 AM   #2
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lol not really a poem drop, and im'a leave feed to this, i need a link

well it wasn't WACK you had somewhat of a flow, but you need to fix that structure, i felt this could of been MUCH better if you put more bar's..

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Old 04-01-09, 05:07 PM   #3
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i thought it was weird...not really a poem no diss..but keep writin dude..
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