this was a basic diss... had your punches here and there... no personals... but a good couple of lines here and there... like the first two, they was alright.... i think it was the 5th and 6th that where the other ones... if u took your time, re-read what u did, then re-do it... might come a little strong.. dunno.. havent tried it for my self...
but over all i would give this a 6/10... some work is needed..

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