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04-16-10, 12:32 AM
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fo4
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prob best song i ever made
IP: 9C44 6395
tell me what u think lyrics r in da video
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04-16-10, 02:14 PM
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the real man of steel
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IP: 02D3 96C2
its ight not bad but flow is a little choppy at points
keep at it
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04-17-10, 07:57 AM
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Addicted
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IP: 90DD 370A
hook was a little bit decent other than that u sound young,i guess the only thing positive thing was the hook, u kind of flowed with the beat,sounded kind of manotone, and sounds like u didnt dub your vocals,but overall no hate not to burst your bubble but wasnt feeling it..
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04-18-10, 08:36 AM
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WhoAreYou?
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IP: 8F32 A89B
some of the lines were noticably stretched out...i wasn't really consistantly feeling the flow in the verses too tough, i mean it sounds like with a bit of work you will definitely get better but just not quite there at the moment. the chorus was ok, that was probably the best part of the song. keep at it
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04-18-10, 09:07 AM
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I don't lose
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IP: DD68 5BB4
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