Perfect or simply all words receivable, all herbs conceivable//
Assassinations in forms that exercises the word unbelievable//
My physical, spiritual, mental states, together known as the Bermuda triangle, deadly with one formality//
Together an abnormality and raising the standard for normality//
Another verse, another causality, feel the essence of this rap, and through it I steadily shine//
As the barrel constantly reclines, changing life designs, and yet remain with the heavenly divine//
Shit, it's catastrophic when I rhyme//
Causing nervous break downs, recipients put in emotional distress, me not the best, please that's more obsurd than
the devil being blessed//
I know u hate me, the fact I’m better makes you hate me harder, to balance the emotions I just pull the glock back even farther//
Pure fire, i’m among a super breed of artists, words sickening contain life and death//
Take a breath, I am one of the illest I just put your heart at rest//

This was aight....Except tha name threw it off....Keep elevatin' before U try sayin' shit like that....

you're the illest?

























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no you aint, you aint even close to being close.
i couldnt catch the rhythm to this piece, and using long words doesnt make you ill.

nice rhyme as usual... "I know u hate me, the fact I’m better makes you hate me harder, to balance the emotions I just pull the glock back even farther// ".... that line killed it tho, u shouldn't have put the glock part into a rhyme that up until that point said nothin' about violence, it's off topic plus kinda really typical.... just a thought ya-know... NE-way the flow and all that was pretty on point.. uppin' yo...

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U SUCK >>> I AM ILLER THAN U >>> AND SO IS EVERY ONE ELSE AROUND HURE

First of all, smokedabud, you can't spell youngin', so stay off the boards. As for everyone else, I am the illest... in my own mind. It's a title yo, y'all takin' the shit literally. I'll put it like this though, any nigga tryin' to see how ill they really are, we can battle... let me know.

I know u hate me, the fact I’m better makes you hate me harder, to balance the emotions I just pull the glock back even farther

This line aint about violence it's about level of emotions, It really capped tha rhyme off.^^^^

Hey Enigmatic,
They are sleepin' on your style. Some just don't get it...to high they haven't got there yet. You and me got's an Abstract flow and Abstract thought. It's like a ship and a submarine. If tha submarine told the ship that there is a boat that can travel on top of the water and travel under tha water too. The ship wouldn't believe him...because the ship's knowledge is little. Because tha only way a ship could go under tha water is if it has a hole in it and sink. So he wouldn't believe tha sub when he tells it. But tha sub has a Superior Knowledge that the ship can't understand because of tha limited capabilities of his inate nature.
Deep huh...I like your style and in some ways it's a mirror of mine.
Maybe we should colab' on something heavy, PM me. Oh an how 'bout checkin' my new drop, (tha paths we choose...), I'd like your opinion...Keep bein' ill...

yeah man fuck smokethecock
Im gonna pretty much go along with everything
Tha Linez Drawn said
real nice drop these other guys just dont understand
ur shit

Good lookin' out y'all... keep uppin'.

as long as you think you are no one can take that away from you

work on your flow

I dont' give a flyin fuck who is the illest.

If you think your the illest inside, thats enough said.

for my part, i don't think i'm da illest, i'm a Bad Muthafucka.

good rhymes and flow and vocab
like ur style different

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no, you are not the illest....... know why?

your rhyme scheme has no flow or structure to it at all... which is why you are not the illest.... all flows aside if you dont have that to begin with you aint ill, unless you happen to be DMX..... you need 16 bar verses wit lines that is about the same length, they dont gotta be perfect cuz thats wack if your verses are driven more by formula than by flow.... but unfortunatley yours lack both.... room for improvement....... peace