RULES:
20 Lines Max
3 - 0 KO or first to 5 winz
No Crew, Hatin, or Dickridin Votes
You Spit First within an hour of this

Pz

aiight,
battle vs. quil-spit


I'm known as the mc killer; u wouldn't have a shot staying on Pace with me being Reggie Miller//
Each line will kill ya; as my rhymes r like 'un-stuffed turkey' the way you aren't getting any filler//
Ur bout as real as cartoons so wise up n don't battle a guy that's known to rhyme tough//
Cause I'll have u walk in 'rooms with ceiling clocks' just to prove that ur 'times up'//lol
Let the fighting erupt; kid must be 'delivering testicles', cause he's 'driving' me 'nuts'//
I'll 'carve out your insides' just to prove that when battling me ur 'deprived of guts'//
You can't survive the cuts; this battles like 'illiterate' 'jail mates'; there's no 'con-test'//
Your scripts read like they were revived from the recycling bin; they aren't fresh//
I'm the best; and you beating me is like paraplegics claiming to need an arms rest//
Cut off ur dick n take out the 'MAN' in you so people would be like whose 'He'?//
Everyone knows that imitating karate kicks is the only way to quote Bruce Lee//**
My advice is to shut the fuck up and leave this battle humbled by my presence//
There's trouble in my essence; ill have u figurin out how to beat me.....u cant, so you be rest-less//
Your record doesn't help much; thats why u need my pic to make ur profile look good//
Put wholes in ur 'sweater and screw em'; just to prove that I can 'fuck up your hood'!!!!//
Blows mound enough power to take your foes down as I devour these rows clown//
My tracks are like 2 of my team members mating; the outcome is a Pro Sound//
You're shit 'don't make sense' like having 'flows drowned'; ur texts are too plain//
Kid your too lame...and your lyrics are about as original as your crew's name// *
Blood drips as your shoes' stained; with a cue aim my punches would award you with a bruised frame//

*bonus line for ya*
Experience the worst pain as I use 'pennies to carve ur optics' just to have ur point of 'views changed'//

aiight post yur shit now.

I said 20 lines not 21.

I'll drop in about an Hour and a Half Coz i'm off out for abit

Pz

yo vote on my battle vs, Destin 2 Destroy . . . http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=36171

ima vote on urs as soon as Quik SPit posts./\

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The Soul Purpose LP . . . Summer '04

well then pretend that last line isnt there, i didnt want it to go to waste.

yo thanks for votin on my battle with Destin.

would you vote on my battle with Chrit. It's gettin slept on. Ima vote on this and I'll vote next time u got a battle up too.

click here:::Mind THeory vs. Chrit:: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=36198

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The Soul Purpose LP . . . Summer '04

Check In:

Aight Look

1-2 MIC CHECK!!! i'll cut your ass up like the reaction from a bounced cheque//1
this aint a 10 line set, its gonna be a muthafuckin 10/1 Bet//2
On your Marks, Get ready yo fuck tha rest, i'm already on my way to pick up my crest//3
This is a MIC test, I bet you Throat is worse than the Liver of George Best//4 <<<Alcoholic
All rusty and fucked up like a ship wreck with 100 OAP's scrubing top deck//5

I'll post you out till you are dead worse than Mind Theory freeposting in this thread//6
You'll be shot upon the head with an A-K 47 packed with 15 Cal lead//7
Releasing your grey matter all over your bed did you not hear wot i said//8
I'm an active volcano with heat at my tip when you feel the shake and see me rip//9
I'm comin at you with a Glock at my hip ready to sink you like the titanic ship//10

your goin down to the bottom of the ocean, i'll steal your MIC and carry on boastin//11
flowin and dropin punches able to start you chokin, then you realise your jaw is broken//12
snapped in two like riped scarf i'll grap it in my hands and break it in half//13
Shut your fuckin mouth before i make you starve like an Iraqi gettin bombed apart//14
yo this is just the start! i fucked your bitch last night, then she let off a fuckin loud fart//15

Her fumes were killin me she needs a wash, fuck that i just pushed her off my cock//16
sent her into shock when I smashed her with a rock pull up her ears like DR Spock//17 <LOL
Fuck star trek this is rhyme trek take my shit out of your tape deck//18
You dont deserve it yet MIC CHECK prove your self as a rap neck//19
You fuckin redneck, hillbilly ass wreck, get out my face before i break your neck....

Uppin

hmmm . . . good battle . . .

::Cause I'll have u walk in 'rooms with ceiling clocks' just to prove that ur 'times up'//lol

::Let the fighting erupt; kid must be 'delivering testicles', cause he's 'driving' me 'nuts'//

::Experience the worst pain as I use 'pennies to carve ur optics' just to have ur point of 'views changed'//


^^NICe


::i'll cut your ass up like the reaction from a bounced cheque//1

^^ good concept, could have been worded better

::I'll post you out till you are dead worse than Mind Theory freeposting in this thread//6


^^ lol, thats the only way I ever get any votes in my battles

Quik Spit this is much better then ur other stuff I've read.

theres is still a little bit of filler in there . . . but big improvement . . .


both could use help in flow and structure

but overall I have to give my vote too . . . Mic Check . . .


but nice improvement Quik Spit, much more metaphors and punches and less filler. Keep em comin.

thanks for votin on my battle too.

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The Soul Purpose LP . . . Summer '04

i just got that poll voter status shit, so 1 poll vote for mic check.

if you're gonna vote on my shit Quik you can be constructive instead of comin in there like you're some badass, cause you are not that ill . . . reality check . . .

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The Soul Purpose LP . . . Summer '04

1-0 me...keep votes comin.

hey mic check will you do me a big favor and vote on my battle with Chrit? its gettin slept on bad and we only need one more vote. thanks man. ::: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=36198

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The Soul Purpose LP . . . Summer '04

iight

yo nice battle

But quik spit took this with better flow and punches
this line was off tha hook

"sent her into shock when I smashed her with a rock pull up her ears like DR Spock//17 "

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uppin Votes people